girlsrulz44 Posted November 22, 2005 Report Posted November 22, 2005 the finial part will be up tomorrow Quote
amzy angel Posted November 22, 2005 Report Posted November 22, 2005 On arriving at the station Clare found out that everything was in darkness expect for her and Pete’s office and so she went there calling out for Lana who had called her and that was when it happened someone came up behind her and before she could do anything she was hit at the back of the head and everything went black. Back at the surf club jack was starting to get worried about Clare as the meeting was about to start (everyone was there) and there was no sign of her plus he could not get her on the phone so he decided to head back to the station to see if he could find he leaving ken in charge. As he left the surf club (unknown to him) he was being watched by two women (eve and Sarah). When he got there he saw that Clare’s car had been abandon and he know that something was wrong and knowing that Sarah and eve might be there he got his gun out and went looking for her. After 5 minutes he found her bound and gagged although a wake in a back office. When he got her untied he finial found out who the third woman was and he could not believe it how could she it be her they saw her everyday, she had even helped them look for Sarah and eve, why would she help them. That was when Clare told him that she was in love with peter and all this had been her way of getting back at him for choosing Clare over her. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I love both parts and OMG! but I don't get that bit! Who's the other woman? x x x x Quote
Pete4Leah Posted November 22, 2005 Report Posted November 22, 2005 Oh my God AWESOME story!!! But whos the third woman....I bet its Leah. Cant wait for the final installment!! Quote
Colette Posted November 22, 2005 Report Posted November 22, 2005 oooh interesting, can't wait for the ending, although want Peter to live Quote
girlsrulz44 Posted November 23, 2005 Report Posted November 23, 2005 (edited) lol i now i have not told you i had the whole thing written before i released that i had forgot to tell you who she was so i had to add another part in oh and in case you are wondering lana is the cop with the black hair (the one that peter talked to at the station after he take clare to hospital after they crashed and also was one that arrested jesse after he wrecked bret's office) Edited November 23, 2005 by girlsrulz44 Quote
tasha7905 Posted November 23, 2005 Report Posted November 23, 2005 My thought was Leah too. You are so good at leaving us hanging on for the next part. I cant wait for the final part. Quote
girlsrulz44 Posted November 23, 2005 Report Posted November 23, 2005 My thought was Leah too. You are so good at leaving us hanging on for the next part. I cant wait for the final part. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> leah is still in hospital in a coma Quote
girlsrulz44 Posted November 23, 2005 Report Posted November 23, 2005 sorry lana is ment to be lara Quote
amzy angel Posted November 23, 2005 Report Posted November 23, 2005 Was that the final part? Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! x x x x Quote
Pete4Leah Posted November 24, 2005 Report Posted November 24, 2005 So the other woman was the cop? What was her motive? Great story by the way and Im glad that CLaire decided to stay in SB! Quote
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