kitkat1992 Posted July 5, 2010 Report Posted July 5, 2010 :crying: that was so sad. The whole chapter was so true to their characters, Aden trying to be strong for Belle and just letting her cry I can't wait for the next chapter Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 5, 2010 Report Posted July 5, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 5, 2010 Report Posted July 5, 2010 Loved the little bit with the taxi driver, such a small, sweet moment.I'm worried about Belle, she seems borderline suicidal, hopefully they'll be able to help her cope. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 9, 2010 Report Posted July 9, 2010 Woah!I could see that Belle and Alan were getting closer but I wasn't expecting him to kiss her like that, bit unprofessional of him. Reveal hidden contents I've a strong feeling he's going to be her second husband, the one Illiana thought was her father.I actually thought Aden was already dead when I read that opening, looks like there isn't long to go anyway... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 9, 2010 Report Posted July 9, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Posted July 20, 2010 Oh...wow.That was seriously heartbreaking, especially when they were crying on the bed together. Didn't like Alan at the start but I'm glad he's realised he was being inappropriate.This is a really well-conceived story, I'm really enjoying it. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 20, 2010 Report Posted July 20, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 22, 2010 Report Posted July 22, 2010 I'd almost forgotten about Adult Illiana!It's nice that she's starting to remember Aden from when she was young. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 22, 2010 Report Posted July 22, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Hannah-K Posted July 23, 2010 Report Posted July 23, 2010 that was really good! im sorry that i havent replied in a long time but i have been reading it all. im worried by the fact there is no mention of Robbie. its really good and i cant wait to read more Quote
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