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  • 5 weeks later...
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Hmm, interesting chapter, nice to know what everyone's getting up to.Belle's situation is a bit strange and possibly a bit hard on Alan but it's difficult for both of them.The little bits with Robbie were cute.

  • 1 month later...
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I think you portrayed Belle's feelings in that chapter perfectly. The fact that even though she's in a relationship with Alan, she won't just get over Aden.

& I can completely understand her worries over Robbie a well & not being able to get him help elsewhere. I think it's brave to address his needs first though.

Once again, you didn't fail to amaze me with your amazing writing talent.

The characterisation was perfect & the emotions were spot on.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

  • 4 weeks later...
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Oh Laura, that was perfect.

I absolutely loved that chapter. It was just beautiful.

Belle's emotions were just perfect ... exactly how she would be feeling right now. I think it's a mixture of everything though.

She'd be leaving everyone she loves behind, the memories she shared with Aden in Summer Bay & moving will have a big impact on her life & the twins'.

Amazing stuff, Laura. Beautifully written ... perfect emotions & characterisation.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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