Red Ranger 1 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Posted March 17, 2010 Loved the opening with Aden struggling with two crying babies and goofing about to make them laugh.I wasn't expecting you to bring Belle's rapist back into it, that was a shock.Of course, I've got a suspicion the DNA test may show he isn't the father after all... Quote
Zetti Posted March 19, 2010 Report Posted March 19, 2010 I have just spent 2 days re reading this fic. I am absolutely in love with it. Belle's diary is a very good idea for a fic and I love the fact that you kept going back to Illiana's POV and seeing how she reacted to it. I would like to see more of her in the coming chapters if possible! I love Aden and I cant wait to read more.. this is making me want to write a fic.. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 20, 2010 Report Posted March 20, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted March 20, 2010 Report Posted March 20, 2010 OMG... you can't leave it there.... what happens?? Tele xx Quote
Zetti Posted March 20, 2010 Report Posted March 20, 2010 No babies? Empty cot? Noooo Please update soon! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Posted March 21, 2010 Woah!I agree that Imogen and/or Sean would seem the most likely culprits and again there's the worry that while we know Illiana's going to be okay we still don't know what happened to Robert...Looking forward to more. Quote
Georgia Posted March 21, 2010 Report Posted March 21, 2010 Laura, we have to talk about this. I know you love writing cliffhangers so that we'll keep reading, but I'm fairly sure we all hate it: we're dying of tension, and anticipation. I loved the way the chapter flowed though, and I can't wait for the next one. Thanks for updating, hope you do it again soon Quote
yaz88 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Posted March 21, 2010 Great fic Love thats its wrote through Belle's memories in a dairy, nice touch I wonder where and when Aden and Robert disappear seeing as Illiana didnt know about either of them before. Omg who's taken them?? :S Aden and Belle are so going to kill Mattie... Cant wait to find out what happens next, update soon Xx Quote
Georgia Posted March 27, 2010 Report Posted March 27, 2010 This is too sad Laura, too, too sad. I'm near tears here, because of the last line, and how Mattie doesn't exist to Belle anymore. I would write more, but once I start, I won't be able to stop. Just update soon, please. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Posted March 27, 2010 Oh gosh.That opening really had me fooled that Belle had found her babies but then it turned out to be a dream and she's slowly killing herself...Hopefully the doctors can help her and Robert and Illiana will be found... Quote
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