Red Ranger 1 Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Posted October 15, 2009 So is that...one more chapter after that one?Nice update, it's good to see everyone starting to recover...or trying to anyway.Wondering slightly if Matilda's dreams are about something we don't know about or if I'm reading too much into it.Looking forward to more. Quote
Georgia Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 I'm sad that this one is coming to an end I really enjoyed that chapter, as it concentrated on a lot of the characters, instead of just a few specific ones. Update again soon. Quote
amz89 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Posted October 16, 2009 aww I loved this. I love how aden is supporting her through it all. Sad its nearly over. More soon please. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 I'm glad Belle is doing better Why is that David back, grrr Quote
amz89 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 OMG David leave her alone, loved this chappie was good to see how everyone had turned out in the end. I cant see the sneak peek cuz im on my phone =[ ill check later, cant wait for the final chapter. =] Quote
Georgia Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 Can't wait for the final chapter This story is so amazing... YOU are amazing. Those previews... Quote
HeavenForbid Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 I read chapter 18 in college on Friday but couldn't sign in because I didn't know my password! Anyways, I'll comment now on both chapters. Both amazing as usually. I'm so glad to see everyone is doing well. Although, very curious to know what David is doing back in the Bay. Will he ruin everyone's happiness? Quote
Barbara Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 I'm glad everyone seems to move on from all the awful things that happened a few months earlier. I'm finding it hard to imagine Annie break dancing! Why is David back? Why isn't he in prison? He'd better apologise and then go far far away from the Bay. The last chapter sounds promising. More please (it's the last time I can say it ) Quote
Georgia Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 I'm not mad, because you already told me. I would have been really mad if you didn't tell me though. Bec, this was an amazing story, and thank you for sharing it with us. You captured the emotion perfectly, and I felt a connection to a lot of the characters. I can't wait for the sequel Quote
tessalove Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 Oh my gosh! I actually cried! That was such an emotional chapter!! It was brilliant! Nicole's Pier diner! Really well written! I loved the fic from start to finish! Well done bec! El xx Quote
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