tessalove Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 Good update! So Glad Matties Ok! I love the we Niff bits! Update soon! I can't to find everything out! El xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Posted September 29, 2009 Hmm.So do the police know who did it or not?Either way there seem to be a lot of young women in a bad way here.Looking forward to more. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 Just had to catch up on the last few chapters that I missed lol, anyway good work Bec, I like this fiction Great writing Quote
Georgia Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 I wonder why Belle flinched away from David, but not Aden.... Loved the chapter Bec, and I'm glad you've written Mattie and Lucas together! I hope they find the evil person whose hurting Summer Bay. Update soon.... soon I tell you Quote
Dotti Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Naw! That was heartbreaking, poor Belle “It’s ok,’ he whispered to her as she closed her eyes tightly and choked back sobs. “I’m not going anywhere Damn straight! Please update soon, loving the fic. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Poor Belle! Glad Mattie's ok. Aw, Niff Looking forward to more, Bec! Quote
Barbara Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 I missed an update. I'm so glad Matilda is okay. It's a good thing she managed to scratch the attacker. Hopefully, the police will soon find out who it is. I have a feeling it could be David. Maybe it's because I don't like the guy but I don't trust him. Besides, he always seems to be out of town when a woman is attacked. It's very suspicious. Plus Belle is the connection and he is her boyfriend. Belle asked Aden to stay with her. She didn't ask David. That's great. Hopefully this will help Belle and Aden to get closer. Poor Nicole! She should see a counsellor to help her get through this. More please. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Posted October 1, 2009 Okay, looks like David is officially a creep and the police are definitely suspicious of him.Wonder what made him lose his temper like that?Annie giving him what for was a nice moment.Geoff admitting he liked Nicole was cute.Looks like the police have got some sort of evidence anyway... (I have to ask, given how many of your stories feature a character called David who turns out to be a psycho, did you have a bad experience with someone of that name or are they all meant to be the same character, multiversally speaking?) Quote
tessalove Posted October 1, 2009 Report Posted October 1, 2009 Hmm, I didn't quite get rhe clue, at least i think i didn't! I wish I knew who it was! It seems really obvious! But then you said theres a twist! Grr, I can't wait to find out! Really good chapter! Geoff likes Nic Update soon! El x Quote
rocknroll Posted October 1, 2009 Report Posted October 1, 2009 aww niff are so cute david is becoming rather strange - it could be him i wonder who it is? hmmmm update soon! xx Quote
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