Georgia Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Posted October 3, 2009 Belle kissed Geoff ? Like sisterly on the cheek or something more serious ??? I'm going to pretend it was on the cheek, because she's dying and Geoff can't deal with it if she dies as his girlfriend, instead of a friend.. and Belle loves Aden. Ramble over. Great chapter. I loved the whole chapter, I can't pick a favourite part. Update real soon... Quote
tessalove Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Aww Poor Belle! I hope everything turms out Ok, Well not ok, as we can all guess what will happen but I hope Belle is happy! Update soon! El x Quote
Georgia Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Posted October 4, 2009 Poor, poor, poor Belle. She deserves her happily ever after, but she isn't going to get it I loved the last line because when she dies, people are going to forget she was here, so to me, the last line had a double meaning. Update soon. Georgia. x Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 4, 2009 Report Posted October 4, 2009 lol Geoff and Belle kissed, ahhh cute haha. I loved the last two chapters!!! Quote
Georgia Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Posted October 6, 2009 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww That was for the ending. I think I understand Belle's decision. Aden wasn't able to cope with her illness, but Geoff can help. Update soon, because I love this story - even if it isn't Adelle Quote
Georgia Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Posted October 7, 2009 The ending was just perfect I loved everyone's reactions to Geoff and Belle going on a date, and I can't wait for Belle to talk to Aden, which I'm hoping will be in the next chapter. Update soon Quote
Georgia Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Posted October 8, 2009 That was brillant. I loved the interaction between Belle and Aden, although it was sad (she shattered another one of his dreams) And I have a feeling that in the next coupld of chapters, Geoff and Belle will be having a relationship talk. Update soon. Quote
Georgia Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Posted October 9, 2009 I want a Geoff, I really really want a Geoff. That was so sweet, about how beautiful she was, despite the cancer. And you are welcoming for keeping you motivated. This is one of the best stories I've read, because it's a really different idea, and you are an amazing writer. So keep writing Update soon. Quote
Georgia Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Posted October 12, 2009 My eyes are welling up with tears. That was so beautiful, and that last end bit, when Belle was doubting herself and then realized that Geoff wasn't just doing a good deed, that was one of the best bits of writing I've read. Update soon Quote
Georgia Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Posted October 12, 2009 I don't know what to say... that was beautiful and perfect. It had the banter going on, but at the same time, some deep moments for the pair. Update soon. Quote
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