mbi615 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Angelo has to live! Charlie wouldn't be able to cope without him. Great that Ava's found but it's awful that she had to witness her dad being shot. Wow, this has got me sitting on the edge of my seat, please update soon!! Quote
tessalove Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Angelo better not have bloody died! Charlie did noy go though all that time when he was in prison just for him to get killed!!! (I gotta remeber this is a fic about a fictional TV series! :S) Anyway yeah, Please Angelo be alive! Poor Charlie an lil Ava, she had to witness that!! Update soon!! El x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Awww.For a second at the beginning there you did have me worried.Glad that Angelo's all right and that he and Charlie have sorted things out.And for the umpteenth time, Ava is so cute.I'd probably kidnap her as well... Quote
tessalove Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Oh my, I thought he died lol!! Update soon!! El xxx Quote
twinkletoesjess Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Brilliant chapter as usual, although you did have me very worried at the beginning.I think one of the reasons that I love this fic so much is because there relationship is not based around work as it is in the show. It is based more around being a family unit, and a good family unit at that. Ava has to be the most adorable little girl ever and I love the ending where she called Angelo daddy. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 That was a good chapter Glad that Angelo didnt die, & its great that he & Charlie have sorted things out now Changelo & Ava is so sweet, bless... I liked it at the end of the chapter when she stopped and called Angelo "Daddy" Looking forward to the next chapter Quote
Barbara Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 How could you start the chapter like that? You scared me! I'm so glad Angelo is okay and Charlie and Angelo are getting back together. Well done to Ruby for listening to her mum and stepfather's conversation. She saved his life. “Has the baby been born yet?” “No sweetie, there’s not going to be a baby anymore” “Was it because I said I didn’t want one anymore?” “No, something went wrong in mummy’s tummy” Charlie told her daughter “Well maybe you could put another one in?” Ava asked Aw. She is funny. It doesn't work that way though but she doesn't know that of course. She's calling Angelo daddy now. That's great. I can't believe she thought Charlie had sent her away. I guess she'll need some time to get over it. More please. Quote
Inactive User Posted October 14, 2009 Report Posted October 14, 2009 Great chapter. Loved how Ava called Angelo 'daddy' so cute! More soon please Quote
mbi615 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 Oh woah, you really scared me there at the start! Great that Charlie and Angelo have sorted everything out and they're together again. Aww Ava is so adorable! My fave part has to be when she called Angelo daddy! Please update soon. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 That was a good chapter. Glad that Xavier & Ruby are married now, it was great to read that & its good that they suprised them all with their 3 week honeymoon to Thailand More please Quote
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