~Zoe~ Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 Just started reading this Danni, its very good & its a fiction with Charlie/Angelo/Ruby, my three favourite characters, after Aden Nice work, your a good writer! Quote
Barbara Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 Ross Too bad, he never got to know Ava. Poor Charlie! She feels so bad and guilty but Ross would have never hated her. He loved her. At least, Charlie, Ruby and Morag have each other to get through this. More please. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 Poor Charlie Shame Ross never got to know Ava. Good chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 What a sad and beautiful, touching chapter you had written. Poor Ross Pity he never got to see his second granddaughter. So sad he and Charlie didn't get to sort things out before he died. Can't wait to see what would happen next for Charlie and Ruby, Ava and Morag. Update soon Quote
mbi615 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Posted September 29, 2009 (edited) Aww that was a sad chapter, poor Charlie! I can't believe that she thought her dad hated her but it's good to hear that Ruby, Charlie and Morag will get through this together. Loved that chapter, looking forward to reading more of this! Edited September 29, 2009 by mbi615 Quote
tessalove Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Aww Poor Ross! And Charlie! He didn't even meet Ava! That was a sad chapter! Well written though! UPdate soon El xx Quote
~Zoe~ Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Poor Charlie drinking too much, & hope Angelo is okay, does'nt sound too good Great writing Danni, its really good Quote
Laura Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Great 2 chapters! Aww, Ross died . Poor Charlie and Ruby. And Morag. As if Charlie didn't have enough to deal with with a baby and Angelo in prison Can't wait for more Quote
Barbara Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 Oh no. I really hope Angelo will be okay. Charlie isn't going to cope if it turns out he died in the explosion. Please tell me she didn't sleep with Bill. Ava is so cute. The poor little girl is in pain. Happy birthday Ruby! More please. Quote
Danni02 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 (edited) Oh no. I really hope Angelo will be okay. Charlie isn't going to cope if it turns out he died in the explosion. Please tell me she didn't sleep with Bill. Well I could tell you......but I dont want to. That would just spoil it. But you will find out one of these things in the next chapter. Edited September 30, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
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