Inactive User Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Loved the last two chapters. They are really good. More soon please Quote
tessalove Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 I didn't expect it to be Ruby, Well i did, but then i though it was Charlie because of the last line! Really good chapter!! El xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Noticed this a while back but thought I'd leave it until we were further along in the UK.And it is absolutely brilliant.You've captured all the characters really well, I love the relationship between Charlie and Ruby here, sad what happened to Ross and I loved everyone's reaction to it.Glad you didn't kill Angelo and hoping there's some way he and Charlie can see each other.Surprised that not many people seemed to realise that was Ruby with the test, liked the way Charlie handled it.Looking forward to more! Quote
mbi615 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Good on ya Charlie for talking some sense into Ruby! Aww, I love how Ruby's trying to get Angelo to see Charlie, so sweet! In a way, Bill sounds nice but he also sounds kinda creepy. I think there's more to Bill than meets the eye. More soon please. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Thats good of Ruby helping Charlie out with Angelo, hope Angelo gives her a visiting order & at least Charlie did'nt sleep with Bill that night, thats a good thing Good update Danni. Quote
tessalove Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 That was a good chapter! Im glad Ruby has seemed to sort things out! I hope things won't go badly with Angelo!! Update soon! El x Quote
Inactive User Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Great chapter. More soon please Quote
Barbara Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Aww Jack and Martha are having another baby. A little brother or sister for Olivia! I'm glad Angelo is fine. I love Ruby and Charlie's relationship. They're always there for each other. It was so nice of Charlie to stay with Ruby while she was waiting for the pregancy test results. And it was so sweet of Ruby to try and contact Angelo. I really hope he'll want to contact her. Little Ava is so cute. She crawled towards her mummy who was crying. I'm sure she wanted to cheer her mummy up. More please. Quote
tessalove Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Aww Poor Charlie! At least Angelo knows about Ava now! I hope they can work it out somehow! Update soon! Xx Quote
Barbara Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Finally, they saw each other again! And Angelo was so excited when he found out about Ava. And then it all went wrong. I have a feeling Ruby'd better hide when Charlie gets home. More please. Quote
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