Barbara Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 Great chapter! I'm glad Charlie and Angelo made up. I love the way he talks about Ava, the way he says "Ava, my daughter". It's so sweet! Poor Ruby! It's bad enough Xavier has a girlfriend but it's even worse to find out like that. More please. Quote
KirstyEkua Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 Finally read it all, sorry it took me ages! But i really like it. I love how close Charlie and Ruby are, it's really sweet and you write it really well. I have to say im not Angelo's biggest fan but i do hope he gets out of prison. And i love the little Rachel mentions Quote
tessalove Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 Aww that was really good! So cute! Update soon! El x Quote
Inactive User Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 This is really great. Glad Charlie visited Angelo again. Poor Ruby seeing Xavier with another girl Glad Nicole was there to hug her. More soon please Quote
mbi615 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 Aww what a sweet chapter Danni! Xavier and Ruby have broken up but it must stink to see someone you still love with someone else. I loved Angelo and Charlie's conversation... ooh they're too cute! Please update soon. Quote
Barbara Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 I don't think a prison is a place for a baby but it would be nice to see Angelo meet Ava. I hope this will happen someday. Hopefully when Angelo gets out of jail, she'll recognise and like her daddy. The mum and daughter talk was sweet. I hope Charlie is wrong and Xavier won't hurt Ruby again. If he hurts her again, I'll have to kick his butt. Ruby seems so happy. More please. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 I dont think prison is a baby, but it would be good for Angelo to meet Ava I liked the mum and daughter chat between Charlie & Ruby, you write their reletionship so well Glad that Ruby & Xavier are back together & that he does'nt hurt her again Great update , more please! Quote
mbi615 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 A prison isn't exactly a great place for a baby to be, but I do hope that Angelo will meet Ava soon! I really liked the chat between Ruby and Charlie, their relationship is great! Ruby and Xavier are back together! Let's hope this time he doesn't hurt her again. Please update soon. Quote
Inactive User Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 Loving this story. Loved Charlie and Ruby's relationship in this story More soon please Quote
Barbara Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 Another JM baby! You made up your mind about the baby's name then. Olivia is so cute and funny! I'm sure she'll learn to appreciate Sophie soon enough. Angelo is really excited about his daughter, isn't he? That thought must help him get through his daily life in prison. Maybe he can get out of prison early for good behaviour or something. They do that sometimes, don't they? More please. Quote
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