adellejefferiesxox Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 Awwww Georgia I loved it, thanks for the prezzie You wrote Charlie and Angelo spot on! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 Brilliant opening!I could really imagine them having that conversation, it was just like them and I could see both their points of view.Looking forward to more! Quote
Danni02 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 Good start! Looking forward to more! Quote
tessalove Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 Changelo! Loved it! Really good start! Can't wait for more! El x Quote
Danni02 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 (edited) Really loved that chapter! Loved the Ruby/Charlie interaction. Good update! Edited October 7, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
matticus01 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 ok... i promise I will get around to reading this and I will.... im just gunna be busy in the next couple of days so I will read it most likely Saturday! Quote
tessalove Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 Aww loved it! SO sweet! Although its ruff, and im trying hard not to like them, Its so nto working lol Really good writing! Update soon! El xX Quote
mbi615 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 Wow Georgia, this is a really good fic and you're a very talented writer! Great start and I love the interaction between the characters. Looking forward to reading more. Quote
mbi615 Posted October 9, 2009 Report Posted October 9, 2009 Go Charlie for being the hero but I really hope that she's okay. Great chapter Georgie, more please. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 9, 2009 Report Posted October 9, 2009 Oh, that was great, really exciting.Suddenly everyone's a hero.Loved Charlie decoying Angelo and then running in.Hopefully someone'll get her out now... Quote
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