meant2live Posted September 30, 2009 Report Posted September 30, 2009 I love this story it's awesome. I've always been a fan of Drew and Belle, and this story is getting better and better. Love it. You write so well. Can't wait for more Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Yeah an update from Jen before I go to bed - Thank you Great update hun, I liked reading that chapter with everything that was happening in it. The discriptions of the characters were brilliant Jazz.. oh dear, I hope she gets help or something, thats not good.. especially as she had alchol poisoning, & poor Drew, I really felt sorry for him, bless - 3/4 more chapters left, aw - well its been a great fiction to read so far, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters before you finish this, as like I said to you a few weeks ago, this is my favourite fiction on here, as well as your artwork. Quote
Georgia Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 I was just about to shut down my laptop, and I saw that there was an update The interaction between Belle and Irene was fantastic, as was the Belle and Drew interaction. 3-4 more chapters ? What am I gonna read after this ? I can't wait to see how you end this story, Jen. It's been an amazing read. Georgia. xx Quote
Dotti Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 I don't know which part I enjoyed the most, I loved it all! Please! Please! Update soon Jen. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Absolutely brilliant chapter.You've got to love Irene, I love how she was so supportive of Belle and by extension of Drew when she found out what was going on.That scene when they were searching the house and no-one was answering them was magnificently tense.Hope Jazz and Drew are all right. Quote
LAURZY! Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Posted October 2, 2009 Loved Irene at the beginning Poor Drew I hope Jazz can get help for the drinking and Drew too cos he's been through alot! Really glad he didn't push Belle away Brilliant Cant wait to read more Quote
Lise Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 (edited) That was great. I think it's best chapter, so far. You had me glued to it the whole time. Poor Drew - I can totally understand him not knowing what to do because sometimes it's easier to do nothing. Irene was great right through that chapter. Hopefully, Jazz will get the help she needs now. I loved how the house was perfect but the people inside it were anything but. I'm sad that this is almost over. Edited October 3, 2009 by Lise Quote
Georgia Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 That was just amazing Jen, I loved it. I loved how you got into Drew's head, and explained how he was thinking. My favourite part was the last little paragraph. It was like a goodbye, but without a goodbye, if that makes sense. Quote
matticus01 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 brilliant chapter jen just caught up and read the last couple.... is this the end... or is there more... I hope there's more Wow... I love the way Peter was introduced, brilliant way to do that... and Drew's confusion lol... Just brilliant Quote
Lise Posted October 7, 2009 Report Posted October 7, 2009 (edited) That was great. I liked the way you explained Drew's thoughts and his anger towards Jazz. I liked Peter, too and it's good to see that he's come back to look after Drew. I really hope that Jazz gets the help that she needs now. I, also, hope that's not the end for Belle and Drew. Edited October 7, 2009 by Lise Quote
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