Bethan_Paige Posted April 18, 2009 Report Posted April 18, 2009 Eeek she's falling for him Aww I can't wait to see how this turns out Fabby writing! Quote
LAURZY! Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Posted April 18, 2009 Once again... brilliant! Your getting the characters just right Really looking forward to seeing how all this betting and what not turns out and develops Cannot wait for more! Quote
Lise Posted April 19, 2009 Report Posted April 19, 2009 I liked that chapter. I liked the Cassie/Belle conversation. It's funny that they think he knows what's going on. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Posted April 22, 2009 Good chapter.I liked the way you shifted the viewpoint between them halfway through so we got to see what they were both thinking.Looking forward to more. Quote
LAURZY! Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Posted April 22, 2009 Fantastic Like Red Ranger said, i really liked how you showed us both their perspectives on the conversation. Never knew Drew had that much knowldege about those kinda films Really liked the beginning where Belle didn't know what to say Quote
Lise Posted April 23, 2009 Report Posted April 23, 2009 Really good chapter. Like everyone else said I like the change of perspective. Drew's knowledge of Leo, Brad and especially High School Musical is kinda scary. Can't wait to see where this is headed! Quote
Bethan_Paige Posted April 26, 2009 Report Posted April 26, 2009 Haha i liked the sound of music reference and I love how you write Drew and Belle. Their sooo cute looking forward to reading the next chapter Quote
Lise Posted April 27, 2009 Report Posted April 27, 2009 Love the last line! There's nothing wrong with inflicting a bit of pain on Drew. It was quite funny, actually. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Posted April 27, 2009 Nice to see Drew's still got his attitude even when he's in pain.Good chapter.Liked the last line and Belle's reaction to it. Quote
LAURZY! Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Posted April 27, 2009 LOL! That was sooo good! I love how you write their banter Awww... Even though i know it's part of a bet, that last line was pretty sweet!! Quote
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