Red Ranger 1 Posted May 31, 2009 Report Posted May 31, 2009 Ah...Another good update, it's obvious that Drew is seriously falling for her.Wonder what he has planned for the party...Looking forward to more. Quote
LAURZY! Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Posted May 31, 2009 Awwww Drew, he really likes her I loved that she ditched Cassie to have dinner with Drew haha Cant wait to see what happens with this party! Cannot wait to read more Quote
lachsm Posted June 1, 2009 Report Posted June 1, 2009 another great update jen why am i not surprised though drew is so falling for her awwwww cant wait for the party marc Quote
matticus01 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Posted June 2, 2009 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Drew likes Belle..... Drew likes Belle I loved it, but what will happen next I wonder update soon Quote
matticus01 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Posted June 7, 2009 HA I loved it... But can I sense a bit of jealousy in Cassie? hmmmm, once again great! “That depends,” Drew said. “On what?” I asked, worried about what his demand may be. “Whether my confirming that this is a date will result in me experiencing any unnecessary pain,” he said, smirking. I surrendered my hands in the air, like I was calling a truce and Drew smiled before nodding, “Then it’s a date.” That bit was my favourite, made me laugh Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Posted June 7, 2009 Loved Belle randomly asking if they were on a date.Wonder what's going to happen at the party... Quote
LAURZY! Posted June 7, 2009 Author Report Posted June 7, 2009 That was brilliant! Loved Belle asking wether it was a date or not I wish Drew had of let her in.... Cant wait to see what happens at the party Loved it! Cant wait to read more Quote
lachsm Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 this was my favorite bit “Is this a date?” I asked suddenly. Drew’s head shot up, the blank expression quickly removed from his face. It seemed that there was still a spark underneath. He was clearly surprised by my sudden question. Admittedly, it was rather random. “What?” he spluttered, blinking many times and attempting to focus on my face. I felt the blood surge from my heart up to my cheeks as he stared down at me. “Well, I was just wondering if this is in fact a date, a real date, not just lunch between a two people of the opposite sex that might in fact seem like a date, even though it might not,” I clarified. A familiar smirk crept over Drew’s face. The muscles around his mouth relaxing as the grey cloud began to clear. He let out a strangled laugh, “You are a strange girl.” I furrowed my brow, attempting to decode what that actually meant. “What’s that supposed to mean?” I asked. Drew just shrugged, before contemplating my original question. “What would you constitute as a date?” he asked. I pondered momentarily before answering, “There are three simple rules,” I said. “You have rules?” Drew asked sceptically. I ignored his comment and began my list which I had composed in my head. “Number one: It has to involve a set time. For example, lunch, dinner, or 8 o’clock.” “Check,” Drew replied. “Number two: The person who initiates the set time, is also in charge of allocating the activity which takes place during that time. For example, eating or the movies.” “Check.” “Number three: Both persons are aware and that the date is an official date. A date can’t be a date without the consent of both persons present.” “Check.” “So wait, are you saying this is a date?” I asked suddenly, realising that Drew had clearly check marked his approval to each of my rules. “I guess if I say that this is a date and you agree, then it is in fact a real date,” he said, his voice light and conversational. “So?” “That depends,” Drew said. “On what?” I asked, worried about what his demand may be. “Whether my confirming that this is a date will result in me experiencing any unnecessary pain,” he said, smirking. I surrendered my hands in the air, like I was calling a truce and Drew smiled before nodding, “Then it’s a date.” great work jen absolutely loved it cassie's getting jealous Marc Quote
Lise Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 Nice couple of chapters, Jen. I wish Drew had opened up a little more. The banter is cute between them. Quote
Lise Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 Loved it! You don't go to so much effort for someone you don't even like but it's interesting to see Belle still denying that she like's Drew. I liked the bit at the end with Belle and Cassie's conversation. Quote
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