matticus01 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 hahaha Cassie is bitter I loved how Belle didn't know what to wear even though she cant stand Drew! Loved it! update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 Good chapter, loved that last line.Even Cassie notices there's something between them... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Posted June 19, 2009 Like the way Belle's suddenly started calling him Drew.And I had to laugh at Drew stumbling across Lucas and Cassie. Quote
LAURZY! Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Posted June 19, 2009 Loved the ending! Awwww i didn't want Belle to walk off lol So sweet that they kissed Why did he have to drunk?! lol I liked having both points of view again, it's really good to get both of their thoughts Brill as per! Cant wait to read more, hopefully Belle wont be too hard or stubborn toward Drew lol Quote
matticus01 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Posted June 19, 2009 HAHA! Loved it, especially Lucas and Cassie getting caught! nicely written again Jen Quote
~Zoe~ Posted June 19, 2009 Report Posted June 19, 2009 Good chapter Jen, loved it especially Lucas and Cassie getting caught Good work! Quote
lachsm Posted June 20, 2009 Report Posted June 20, 2009 oooo lucas and cassie i absolutely love the way you write out their thoughts its great to see it from their point of view especially when belle and drew fight with themselves over whether there is an attraction or not grrrrr why did he have to be drunk great work as always Jen Marc Quote
Lise Posted June 21, 2009 Report Posted June 21, 2009 YAY! Belle and Drew kissed if only Belle hadn't left like that. I like how Drew found Lucas and Cassie kissing. Beautifully written, again. Quote
LAURZY! Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Posted June 25, 2009 That wasn't too full on at all, i loved it! the description made it seem so real She walked off again?! My god she's stubborn lol I'm quite liking Lucas and Cassie That was really well written, the description and dialogue were spot on Quote
matticus01 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Posted June 25, 2009 hmmmm... well to be honest.......... I LOVED IT, EVERY SECOND OF IT! And you thought I was gunna say something bad teehee not to OTT, just perfect, update soon Quote
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