leah1234 Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 No belle!!!!!! Why did you open your mouth Aden better not leave and I mean that Upate whenever you can I know what it's like I have mock exams coming up in February so there's no pressure on an update xxxxxxxxxxxx Quote
Zetti Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 My first comment is I love Drew and Mattie's comment about the baby's name Druella? Scary name. I love the almost subtle way Ric tried to stay out of the baby name conversation but somehow ended up having something to put in I missed the interaction with them all so thumbs up on that. On the other hand {I sound like I am writing an essay. Well I just finished one so maybe thats why... lol} the drama and tension between Aden and Belle is beginning to get unbearable. Make it better please. The ending has me slightly scared, I am scared Aden might attack Justin Dont let that happen and dont let Belle stray to Justin, she isnt allowed anywhere near him. Understand! Update soon? xx Quote
karenp Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 Great update as always . I think aden should leave for a couple of days maybe space will do them some good, he's also starting to irritate me a little lol. Cant wait to find out what he does. Quote
xknomex Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 (edited) Belle? what have you done!?!?!?!?! You cant let Aden leave!!!!! please dont let him leave, please make it all better! apart from that shock at the end that was one AMAZING chapter!!!! you wrote so well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW. Loved the scene in the diner with Drew, Mattie, Ric, and Belle. was funny, lol Update when you can xxxxx Edited January 10, 2009 by xknomex Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVED this chapter! It was nice to see Belle relax a bit more with the others and i liked the way you described how Aden and Belle's relationship had been over the last few days. I'm glad you didn't have Belle hide the fact she'd seen Justin and i'm really glad she got angry, i was hoping it would knock some sense into Aden, but his reactions were perfect! I loved the ending! You're writing these scenes really well, especially because you are showing the actual effects on their relationship as well as individually. Hope you get the chance to update soon! Can't wait! Quote
emma_2006 Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 haha the comment about druella and Maddie were so funny, I love there little friendship Pleaseeeeeee dont let Aden leave!!!!! I want him to stay and talk!! I loved this chapter Update when you can Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 Belle!!!!!! why did she open her mouth? lol LOVED this chapter though, the tension and the humour and just....everything was great I'm really glad Belle told him she saw Justin! Loved the diner scene, Drew - you've gott love him Brill update, cannot wait to find out what happens!! Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 10, 2009 Report Posted January 10, 2009 Great update Taniya! The angst is so realistic and you write soooooooo well! Can't wait for the next chapter Quote
bikinikill Posted January 11, 2009 Report Posted January 11, 2009 He had so better turn around. I understand why he is upset, but Belle is right, they need to talk about it. Really enjoying this. Thnaks for writing it. Quote
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