Unfamiliar (by Taniya_K) - comments

[LAURZY!]

Oh i absolutely loved it!!!

I love Justin lol i can just imagine him, really glad they seem more relaxed around each other now

Really loved the Mattie and Belle scene, i love how you write their friendship, and 'Beanie' so cute!!

I'm lovin that she asked him what the cake was haha she is right though, a cake isnt cake if its not chocolate lmao

Brilliant update, it was so light hearted and pretty chilled, really good!!!

And there's no need to thank me, its my pleasure

[karenp]

Brilliant update as always. Loved belle and matties conversation. Cant wait for more

[Louise_2983]

Lol I loved the bit about Mattie being able to take Belle out of the world in minutes! And aww Aden brought Justin home how cute.

[Zetti]

Can I have Justin?? Please! Damn Justin's comments made laugh

I missed Mattie as well. The threat was good reading!

Hehee the chocolate cake comment. Well I agree with her!!!

I loved the chapter, just drama free!

[wrongturntaken]

I LOVED this chapter!!!!!! Mattie and Belle's talk was awesome!!!! Especially the 'girl talk'!

I loved how you brought Justin into that bit as well.

I'm glad Justin got to see their house, it was kind of sad that Aden has got all this stuff and Justin doens't really have anything, i liked how you did that with the pictures.

The banter between Aden and Belle was so sweet!!! Especially the chocolate and the cheesecake thing! Really made me giggle!!! I really like when Justin sees Aden and Belle together for some reason, i just love how you write it. I really want some more of Justin/Aden/Belle scenes.

Can't wait for another update!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

[Adelle_fan1000]

Ahhh i loved the Update taniya... I loved the Mattie and belle talk

Surprised Aden brought Justin home

[Lise]

I was missing Mattie, too. I always forget to write that sort of stuff in my comments. It was good to see her making an appearance, again.

The Justin and Aden stuff in this chapter was good. Justin will have to leave soon because he would have hit on every girl in the Bay.

Belle and her chocolate cravings make me laugh. I have them and I'm not even pregnant.

[xknomex]

LOVED that chapter!!!

It was great to see a conversation with Mattie and Belle, and I loved Mattie's nickname for the baby, sooo cute.

I have to agree 150% with Belle on the cake situation, its not a cake unless its a chocolate cake!!!

I'm glad Justin and Aden seem to be getting on, it seems justin actually wants to make a go of things

Once again a brilliant update

xxx

[Jody]

I absolutely loved this chapter. I missed Mattie as well. Loved her death threat. She's just so awesome in this fic. The way she talked about Justin's flirting was hilarious, especially her wanting to strangle him. Also that nickname. The girl is too funny. I'm glad she's not going to Perth. Maybe this way we'll get to see scenes with her more often.

Aden bringing Justin to their house was sweet. I'm glad they seem to be moving forward. That part with the photos was really good. As well as Justin's wisecracks.

I loved Belle's cravings. Especially about how the sticky red thing was trying to be a cake but failing horribly . Pregnant Belle, when she wants her chocolate, is hilarious. And I don't find it OOC at all, with her being all hormonal because of the pregnancy. Yeah, it definitely wouldn't have been a good idea to have her act like this when they were having problems, but now it's definitely welcomed.

While I wasn't a fan of Amanda's first run in with Justin, I loved her when she was explaining it to Belle. That scene was so Amanda. I also absolutely loved Matilda explaining her run in with Justin to Belle. Their irritation at him for not being able to back off is hilarious. It's amusing to read. I love that they just want to strangle him at times. But Belle around Justin still doesn't do anything for me. I like that she's warmed to him. And is willing to put up with him. While I'll still always believe he deserves a big apology from her(especially since you'd think she'd understand running away from home because you can't take living there aymore), I think she's come along with the way she treats him. But she was much more funnier when she was listening to Amanda and Matilda about him. But, like here, around him herself she always comes of as an old grandmother. Like he's a child she only puts up with because she has to. I don't expect them to be friends. But why can't she express her exasperation at his flirting with her and her friends and family in a more witty and amusing way. I quite like the way everyone tends to treat him like a pain sometimes because he tends to act that way, but I love how they are always funny about it. Belle, when around him, just isn't. I think she has forgotten about the funny and fiesty girl who she once was, the one who didn't care about the fact that the guy she wanted was taken. Atleast he just flirts, and not goes around scheming and trying to break up all these relationships like she once did. I know she's changed and growup since then, but that took alot of time and finding something better. She ever consider that maybe he just hasn't found anything worthwhile to change his ways over. And for god sakes he's just an hopeless flirt, big deal. This attitude around him(not so much her words, but that too, but her expressions and thoughts), in the tiny part she was around him here(but at other times she's around him too), isn't fiesty, cute, funny, or whatever it's supposed to be, she's acting like she as a stick up her a**. If I was Justin and that was my first meeting with her in a calm enviroment (without the accusations and arguing), lets just say I'd starting questioning my brothers taste in woman. Exasperation and frustration at Justin is fun to read. So try being funny Belle.

But since I loved Belle for most part of this chapter. Okay well every single part when she wasn't around Justin, I can't be too mad at her. Doesn't stop me from ranting though, but I can't bring myself to dislike her or anything right now. Her scenes with Aden and Mattie were too awesome for me to hold a grudge about her, once again annoying, behaviour around Justin.

Please update soon.

Edited February 8, 2009 by Jody

[Taniya_K]

Can I have Justin?? Please! Damn Justin's comments made laugh

Sorry, but Justin's un-haveable! I doubt you'd be able to tie him down to one girl. If you manage it, then youre welcome to him!

While I wasn't a fan of Amanda's first run in with Justin, I loved her when she was explaining it to Belle. That scene was so Amanda. I also absolutely loved Matilda explaining her run in with Justin to Belle. Their irritation at him for not being able to back off is hilarious. It's amusing to read. I love that they just want to strangle him at times. But Belle around Justin still doesn't do anything for me. I like that she's warmed to him. And is willing to put up with him. While I'll still always believe he deserves a big apology from her(especially since you'd think she'd understand running away from home because you can't take living there aymore), I think she's come along with the way she treats him. But she was much more funnier when she was listening to Amanda and Matilda about him. But, like here, around him herself she always comes of as an old grandmother. Like he's a child she only puts up with because she has to. I don't expect them to be friends. But why can't she express her exasperation at his flirting with her and her friends and family in a more witty and amusing way. I quite like the way everyone tends to treat him like a pain sometimes because he tends to act that way, but I love how they are always funny about it. Belle, when around him, just isn't. I think she has forgotten about the funny and fiesty girl who she once was, the one who didn't care about the fact that the guy she wanted was taken. Atleast he just flirts, and not goes around scheming and trying to break up all these relationships like she once did. I know she's changed and growup since then, but that took alot of time and finding something better. She ever consider that maybe he just hasn't found anything worthwhile to change his ways over. And for god sakes he's just an hopeless flirt, big deal. This attitude around him(not so much her words, but that too, but her expressions and thoughts), in the tiny part she was around him here(but at other times she's around him too), isn't fiesty, cute, funny, or whatever it's supposed to be, she's acting like she as a stick up her a**. If I was Justin and that was my first meeting with her in a calm enviroment (without the accusations and arguing), lets just say I'd starting questioning my brothers taste in woman. Exasperation and frustration at Justin is fun to read. So try being funny Belle.

Just reading that gave me an idea for a scene that would sum up about everything that I planning a chapter or two for in half of it And funny Belle! Got it.

Thanks for all the feedback guys. Love hearing everything you think

xoxo

Edited February 8, 2009 by Taniya_K