xknomex Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 erm.... I cant think of anything to say!!! I've been in tears since the first sentence.... it was just.... wow! seriously Tanyia that was just outstanding, it was written to perfection. WOW Please, please let Aden be okay!!! please *gets on hands and knees to beg* wow, update soon xxxx Quote
steff99 Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 (edited) Ah i loved that chapter I hope Aden's okiee though!!!!! Edited February 24, 2009 by steff99 Quote
Lise Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 That was really good. I hope that Aden's ok. I liked the parts that Roman, Amanda and Irene had to play in that chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! Quote
bikinikill Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 That was really great Taniya. I hope Aden is ok. Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 That was absolutely fantastic!!! And so sad!!!! I loved how you've told us he's got really serious injuries but the way you're keeping it from Belle still is really clever even though she knows what their silence means really. I loved that scene between her and Roman, and her holding onto Aden's things like the rings was so sad as well! I liked her pondering the ring, it really gives you the sense of her wanting to ask him so he needs to come through! I can't wait for the next update! You are making me feel so much for all of the characters!!!! I love it! Please update soon!!! Quote
SAM27# Posted February 25, 2009 Report Posted February 25, 2009 That was a really great chapter...but so sad. I like how we, like Belle, do not know the full extend of Aden's injuries....Makes me really want to know...I really hope he pulls through, he has to!! Can't wait for the next chapter Oh, and Irene and Amanda were superbly written in that chapter..both of Belle's mum with her..so good!! Quote
Jody Posted February 25, 2009 Report Posted February 25, 2009 That was a lovely chapter. It was nice to see both Amanda and Irene play a part in trying to help her. Rather then just one or the other. I loved those scenes. It's good that she has them around. Having Roman there was definitely a good idea. I liked his scenes as well. Justin wanting to discharge himself so he could look after Aden was sweet. This whole chapter was very sad. Everyone played their part perfectly. I can't wait for the next one. Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted February 25, 2009 Report Posted February 25, 2009 PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! so frustrating, rachel wnt even say whats wrong with him i wud have a bloody freak attack if dat were my boyfriend PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Quote
nicoleee23 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Posted February 25, 2009 Heyy Tanyia! I should apologise because i have been reading this novel for 3 weeks from the beginning and i have finally caught up with it ALL! sorry i havent commented! I must say that your story is amazing, i can really relate to it! There is really good descriptive words and ideas expressed between aden and belle and i am absolutely HOOKED! I dont have a favourite part, I LOVE THE WHOLE THING! i promise i will comment (more &&&& less babble!!) from now on! claudiaaa xx (P.S i also have an account on the aden and belle fan forum!!) Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted February 25, 2009 Report Posted February 25, 2009 (edited) sorry if im pestering you, Taniya, but is there any chance of an update tonight? the suspense is killing me!!! xx Edited February 25, 2009 by Adelle4eva!!! Quote
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