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That was seriously amazing and what she said about only wanting him was sooo sad! But now you're just teasing us Taniya - how long are you going to keep the poor guy on life support? Either kill him or don't but stop keeping us hanging :lol:

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I don't know how you thought that chapter was bad- it was amazing without a doubt!!!

It took me ages to read it because my eyes kept glassing over especially when Belle was in the room with aden, talking about being her hero

I can't say it enough.. I loved it

Don't worry you're safe for now as long as aden pulls through!!!!!!!!

Update soon

xxxxxxx

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OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!

so the tears started here

-The same person who had the ability to take her breath away with just a smile, yet now it was because of the lack of one. The same guy who, to her, had the ability to do anything, yet here he was, a tube down his throat to allow him to keep breathing.

Got really bad here

-you’re my hero, and hero’s don’t get injured for long. So you have to wake up soon. I don’t know what to do without you, Aden, so you can’t leave me. We need you here with us, everyday, cos I don’t have a future without you in it.”

and didn't stop till pretty much here

-Hope you enjoyed it!

So thanks for the tissue warning!! thinking i better keep the box handy for a while though.

It really was brilliant, can't wait for the next update

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Well as you know, the hero bit had me in bits! i had to stop reading just so i could actually see the words haha

Brilliant, just brilliant

LOVED the scene with Justin

and the way you wrote Belle's thoughts was amazing!!

Fantastic :D cannot wait to read more!

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well, what a chapter!!!!

I have to say you made me cry, it was both fantastic and yet sad and the same time.

I just hope he's ok it won't be fair if it isn't.

Belle in the room with him on her own was so emotional if it was me I don't know if could be so strong.

You worte the whole thing superbly. I dont know how you do it.

WOW!!!!

Will there be an update tomorrow?

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Will there be an update tomorrow?

Unfortunately, I doubt it. I will try my best though! :)

Thank you all for the lovely comments! It's great to read each and every one of them... :D

xoxo

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Hey Taniya

That was really great. You write so well. I loved it when Belle was talking to Aden and getting frustrated cause she kept asking him questions. I just loved it all.

I don't agree with Louise and her kill him now or take him off life support comment. I'm happy for him to remain on life support, as long as he pulls through. I don't really want any killing involved at all.

Oh also - I loved how you wrote Justin in this, that was really great too.

:)

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I actually dont know what to say....

Tanyia that was just.....wow!!!!!!!

It was written so beautifully, Belle's words and thoughts to and of Aden were just unbelievable. It brought me to tears!!!!

I'm so glad Aden's okay, I just hope he gets better and not worse cause I don't think I would cope!!

wow!!!!

Fantastic!!

xxxxxx

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