Unfamiliar (by Taniya_K) - comments

[LAURZY!]

WOW! seriously, that was so good!!! You had me in tears again! haha

I dont know where to start, it was all so good and really emotional!

Belle's reactions and behaviour seems so real, i can just imagine someone acting like that if it were real

The scenes where she's talking to him are just heartbreaking

The scene at the end with Drew was fantastic, Drew is so sweet, i love how you write their relationship! Same with the Justin scene, it was nice for them to have an open, pretty serious chat like that

LOVED the convo with Amanda, i think the name Amanda chose was perfect... love the boys nomes too!!

I've probably missed something out but it was all amazing, hope Aden's gonna be ok!!

Cannot wait to read more (sorry this post is so long hahaha)

Edited March 4, 2009 by LAURZY!

[bikinikill]

That was really great Taniya. It didn't drag or anything, you needn't worry. I love that Justin came over, and that Drew really wanted to help too. And I'm glad that Belle opened up to someone, but I hope Aden is ok. I really hope he is ok.

[Jody]

This was another amazing chapter. I enjoyed every bit of it.

It was good to see Amanda and Irene share their worries over Belle with each other. It's nice to see them interact like this. Amanda's scene with Belle about the baby names was sweet. It was good to see Belle distracted from from worrying about Aden, even if it only lasted a moment. 'Nate' and 'Chase', that wouldn't be inspired by a certain GG character and actor, would it? I feel for Amanda in these scenes when she talks about when she was pregnant.

I'm loving reading about how difficult Belle is finding it to deal with Aden not being alright. And the fact that theres nothing she can do. Her little talk to him was sweet.

Belle and Justin's walk was lovely. It was good to see some interaction between them that I enjoyed. I especially loved the bit when she accidently snapped at him and then felt guilty when she realised what she did. I could see Belle getting defensive like that, but when she realised that she was taking it out on the wrong person, felt guilty and apologised. I liked how she realised how hard this must be for him as well. They were both really great in that scene. Both of them felt very in character in this chapter. Justin's confession that his first thought was to leave was so sad. Anyways I loved this whole scene.

I'm glad Drew made an appearance. His jealousy was cute. I love the relationship that they have. I loved the scene were Belle broke down and just let everything she was feeling out. I think she needed that. It's not good for her to be keeping all that inside. I truly felt for her there. Brilliant scene. It was definitely the highlight of the chapter for me.

It didn't drag on at all. I'm glad you covered everything that you did in this chapter.

Please update soon.

Edited March 4, 2009 by Jody

[HAA Girl 08]

W.O.W! It DEFINETLY didn't drag on, it was great!

Great to see some interaction between Justing and Belle, Irene and Amanda, and then Belle and Drew... so sad!

Hope Aden is going to be okay... He HAS to be!!

Great stuff, Taniya! Cannot wait for more

[karenp]

Wow excellent update. It didn't drag out at all. Loved justin and belle's walk. Drew and belle's conversation was also great, i'm glad she finally spoke to someone. I hope aden wakes up soon and is ok. Cant wait for more

[**Julie**]

Amazing chapter. It definitely didn't drag on.

Loved Belle's conversations with Justin & Drew.

Hope Aden is going to be OK.

Update soon.

[Taniya_K]

'Nate' and 'Chase', that wouldn't be inspired by a certain GG character and actor, would it?

'Nate' may just have been, but I honestly didn't make the connection about 'Chase' until I read your comment. I've just always liked them names, and thought that Belle would too. But, in my defence, I do know that Chace Crawford's name is spelt differently!

Thank you all for the wonderful comments. You don't know how much I was worrying about that chapter being too long and boring. So I'm glad no-one's complained about it yet!

xoxo

Edited March 4, 2009 by Taniya_K

[wrongturntaken]

WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING ONCE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT! THE SCENE WITH AMANDA AND BELLE AND THEM TALKING ABOUT THE NAMES! JUST THE IDEA OF THE SCAN MAKES ME SO SAD TO KNOW ADEN WASN'T THERE! I LOVED THE WAY SHE WAS TALKING TO HIM. I know how hard it is to talk to someone when they're on a ventilator and to try and keep talking without breaking down in front of them even though they can't tell... so i can really sympathise with Belle here.

THE REST OF IT WAS BRILLIANT AS WELL! I LOVED THAT JUSTIN AND BELLE HAD THAT TALK, IT WAS PERFECT! AND THEN I'M GLAD DREW WAS THE ONE SHE FINALLY BROKE DOWN WITH, IT WAS SO BRILLIANT THE WAY YOU DID THAT!

LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT!!!!!!!! (AS YOU CAN TELL WITH THE CAPITALS PROBABLY!)

UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lise]

I loved that chapter. It definitely wasn't too long.

I liked the Irene and Amanda stuff.

I loved the Belle and Amanda scene. I like Nate for a name.

The scenes with Belle and Justin and Drew were really good. Justin should talk to Belle but I can understand why he feels like he doesn't want to talk to anyone. I liked that Drew just let her cry and didn't say anything at the end. It's good that she feels like she can vent to him.

I hope Aden wakes up soon! REALLY SOON!

Update soon

[Zetti]

Sorry about lack of comments, have been so busy with work and school. I love Belle's chat with Justin and Drew, its shows she knows she has people to lean on.

I hope Aden wakes up soon though!