wrongturntaken Posted April 9, 2009 Report Posted April 9, 2009 I think that farewell was amazingly written! You could just tell what each one of them was feeling so well, you captured their emotions excellently! I LOVED IT! The start was hilarious with Aden painting her toe nails, i literally laughed properly out loud! Hope you can update soon! It's always worth the wait, i love it! Quote
Lise Posted April 10, 2009 Report Posted April 10, 2009 How can you not like the ending? I loved it. It was typical Justin. Loved that you bought Justin back but it's sad that he's left. Hopefully it's not for too long. He and Aden make for some really good reading. Aden painting Belle's toenails was classic! It made me want an Aden even more if he's going to paint my nails for me Quote
Jody Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) It's happenned. It's finally happenned. Belle and Justin in scenes together and they both rocked. This chapter was . And let the gushing begin. Aden giving Belle a pedicure, really funny. Loved Belle and Aden's playful bickering/teasing in the start. They are acting more and more like the characters I adore with each chapter. I'm loving them again. And then Justin arrives. I missed him. The first little part with Belle and Justin gave me so much hope that I might be finally changing my tune when it comes to their scenes from now on and the rest of the chapter certainly didn't dissappoint. Aden trying to hide his elation at Justin being back is cute. Nice of Belle to let them have some time on their own. "You really need to start hanging out with some guys, mate..." I have to say I was thinking the same thing in the last chapter with Mattie and Belle. Aden doesn't seem to have a guy friend to just hang out with. Maybe we need a Ric/Aden scene sometime. He's usually either going to the gym or shopping with Nicole for something for Belle (or sometimes just going to lunch with Nic). It's all he ever does when hes not with Belle, and it's just not fun. Justin's leaving again . And poor Aden. So sad how he's being all supportive even though he's upset about Justin leaving. That was a good talk they had. Made even better with all their uncertainities and fears that they were trying to keep to themselves. Now to my favourite part. The scene starting with the Justin and Belle banter about the baby and then Justin, Belle and Aden. Before it turned serious, they seemed like such a fun little threesome. I could almost imagine them being three close friends. The three of them really bounced off each other in that scene with the way they interacted with one another. It felt so natural. They were so much fun, the playful bickering between Justin and Belle, and the three of them joking around with each other. So Aden's been complaining about Belle's cooking skills to Justin, I find that very cute. And the kind of scenes I would love to see Aden having with any of the guys like Justin or Ric. The end was a bit sad. Justin telling Belle to look after Aden was sweet. And trust Justin to add a suggestive comment or two along the way. I love that he hasn't lost that side of him. The interaction between the three was awesome. I loved every moment. Their were so many brilliant oneliners in this chapter. This chapter had me smiling so much. First the amazing Belle/Mattie interaction in the last chapter, and then now some brilliant Aden/Belle, Aden/Justin, Belle/Justin and Aden/Belle/Justin goodness in this chapter. These last two chapters have been heavenly. I couldn't get enough of both. Aden ending up in the hospital has done wonders for both their (Belle and Aden) characters. They've been getting closer and closer to their old fun selves again with each chapter. And it's official they definitely have their spark back. Hope it stays. Please update soon. Edited April 11, 2009 by Jody Quote
leah1234 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 Just realised I hadn't commented!!!! Fantabulous chapter I loved everything about it !!!!!! Especially Justin!!!! xxxxxxxxx Quote
MrsL Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Loved the update was absolutely fabulous. The ending made with Justin and Aden makes me want to cry. Love this fic can't wait for more Quote
leah1234 Posted April 13, 2009 Report Posted April 13, 2009 Are you going to update tonight??? xxxxxx Quote
Taniya_K Posted April 13, 2009 Report Posted April 13, 2009 Sorry, but I've been out all day today. I'll try for tomorrow. Thanks for asking! xoxo Quote
Symphony Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 I have so much of this to catch up on!! Quote
bradyell Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 ANOTHER great chapter!! i feel as if i write that everytime but it's always true!! The bit with Aden asking the baby to kick once if it was a girl or twice for a boy was BRILLIANT!! He's just so adorable i think i want him to be right that the baby is a girl!! can't wait for more Quote
~Zoe~ Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 That was a great chapter Taniya Aw, Aden's just adorable Cant wait for more! Quote
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