Unfamiliar (by Taniya_K) - comments

[H&A_diehard]

Half-way decent? It was as excellent as always mate.

I thought their talk was going quite well til Aden misunderstood what she was trying to say. Please, please make it better. I know you will really. Well, I hope you will.

[adelle fan.]

Aww that was sad

hopefully they'll make up soon

[BeforeItsTooLate]

As much as I don't like them fighting, that was a really good chapter; the picture of Belle curling away from Aden broke my heart

And I hate that IPS thing...it always does that to me...

Can't wait for the next one

[Jody]

I just hope that it doesn't turn you off Belle completely.

Nothing could ever turn me of Belle forever. Shes my all time favourite H&A character. I'm happy to see that there is reason coming for this Amanda stuff. I don't mind seeing them fight (love it actually) it's just that Amanda isn't being her fiesty self anymore. It's like shes scared to have an opinion. Anyway looking forward to that storyline between them.

I loving this storyline with Belle doubting herself. It makes so much sense for someone like her to feel like that. I'm glad that she still wants to marry Aden though. And also love how protective she is over the baby. That scene when she thought Aden had implied she could get an abortion was my favourite. It's good that Irene is being there for her. Poor Aden. The end was so sad.

Edited November 12, 2008 by enjoy the ride

[zzazzb]

aww *tear* that was sad Taniya!

[adelle]

Awww poor Belle! Can't wait to see what happens next

[matilda]

Aww that was so sad. I just knew that Belle wouldn't let Aden in. She's such a feisty, independent character that's it's understandable. I hope they make up soon.

[Beate]

That was a good but sad chapter.

I hope they talk things trough soon and make up.

[wrongturntaken]

The ending wasn't rushed at all! It was perfect! ...and when i say perfect i mean like absoloutely PERFECT!!!! I loved that fight, the way you conveyed Aden's emotions and how he was trying to make Belle understand was brilliant and yet the way Belle reacted made perfect sense when thinking about it from her POV!

Fantastic chapter, really amazing, as in WOW standard!

Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Zetti]

That chapter is the best one you have written so far, the way you conveyed their feelings made it really powerful. Hope you write more soon x