Aden+Belle forever Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 That chapter was awsome Loved the fiesty side of Belle, especially when she was threatening Nicole Quote
H&A_diehard Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 Top quality as always. The last bit was and . BTW, I consider Aden to be a bit of a wimp in that chapter. If that was me, Nicole would be getting the smaller bit of cake, like it or lump it. Oh and now I want chocolate cake. Quote
Deborah Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 That was great once again. What is it with you & food in your fics, though, I want chocolate cake now!!! You won't do any good for my waist line! Looking forward to more, as always. Quote
adelle Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 Awww that chapter was great! Loved the Nicole and Aden scene Just because I’m pregnant, doesn’t mean you can touch me whenever you want.” Belle informed her with a slight scowl. lmao, that was brilliant! Update soon Quote
zzazzb Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 that was a great chapter! I love Nicole her scenes with aden were great, they have such a fun friendship and you have everyone craving chocolate cake. no so much me, i want the ice cream. your fics like the opposite of a diet. update soon Quote
meant2live Posted November 15, 2008 Report Posted November 15, 2008 beautiful, loved it. Funny and cute. More please Quote
matilda Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 Sorry I haven't commented for a while- been a bit crazy with uni The chapter was brilliant- it's nice to see other characters being woven into the story. Was lovely to see the brotherly-sisterly relationship with Aden and Nicole and her attempts to hug him after hearing the pregnancy news and then the quick mood change when she found out that Roman already knew . Aden certainly knows how to handle her with chocolate cake! I laughed when Belle threatened Nicole not to touch her stomach- so many other pregnant hormonal women have the same reactions! But it's really believable in Belle's case since she is such a feisty character. And the last two lines- brilliant! Quote
Lise Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 Loved that! Nicole and Aden are funny. The chocolate cake was a good ploy. I think Nicole would be best to stay on the good side of Belle. Quote
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 Just caught up on the last few chapters and they were brilliant! I love that they made up and everything's going smoothly; and when Aden told Nicole was really funny Can't wait for the next update and no, the characters are definitely not OOC, I love how you write them Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.