Deborah Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 Oooh wonder what Amanda's something she has got to do is? Must be good, if she is giving up going shopping! Great update, looking forward to finding out what Amanda is up to especially! Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 I loved that chapter, you want some constructive critisism? There is none. Your fic is perfect!!!!!! There must be something, no? It can't be perfect! Hmm... maybe you guys are right, maybe you're not. Either way, I'm not going to say! Unless, of course... nah. You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for the comments guys. I actually forgot about that 'bean' comment by Mattie xoxo Quote
wrongturntaken Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 Aw! That was such a cute chapter! I reckon Amanda's trying to help them out with somewhere to live too... Can't wait for more, please update soon!!!!! P.s. No constructive criticism, love it just the way it is! Quote
karenp Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 I think she's sorting them some where to live aswell. Great chapter by the way not bland at all. Quote
Lise Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 That was good. I can't think of any constructive criticism, either. Amanda's giving up shopping...it must be good, whatever she's doing! Quote
H&A_diehard Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 There must be something, no? It can't be perfect! Hmmm so you want some criticism then?..... Tough, there is none. Sorry, in a crazy mood tonight. Anyway, Amanda turning down the chance to go shopping? I agree with the other suggestions because this is SHOPPING she is giving up. Quote
Beate Posted November 20, 2008 Report Posted November 20, 2008 Phew. Had some catching up too do. Loved all of the chapters. Aden telling Nicole about the baby was so cute. I can totally see it. No critisism as I can see. I think all your chapters are good as they are. Quote
adelle Posted November 20, 2008 Report Posted November 20, 2008 Awwwww a bean! haha You want constructive criticism???? Hmmmm well if you want to make the fic better....how about another update? lol I'm kidding, in your own time This fic is great!! Quote
meant2live Posted November 20, 2008 Report Posted November 20, 2008 so much to catch up on. But loved it all... the scan was cute, mattie finding out was awesome and what the hell is amanda up to now? more please Quote
Zetti Posted November 20, 2008 Report Posted November 20, 2008 Constructive Critiscm! Ok. First off you need more interaction with Irene and Aden and Belle as they dont seem to have enough scenes together. Second thing, more dialogue. I know dialogue ruins fics but in this case I think it will be good for it anyways.. Quote
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