Lise Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 That was funny but I get the feeling that things aren't going to this way for much longer. The banter between them is great. You could tell that Belle felt bad for cutting him and he felt bad for making a fuss out of it. Quote
Zetti Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Adelle banter. It was so cute She cut him More soon? x Quote
Jody Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 (edited) Whoa, you keep away! He exclaimed, jumping away from her before she could touch him. Crazy, knife-welding woman. Favourite line. They are like an old married couple already(I mean that in a good way). Love the bickering. Is it wrong that I kept wishing everytime they got annoyed, or irritated with each other that it would turn into a full blown fight? Great chapter. Glad they haven't lost their banter. I must add how sweet it was when Aden immediately felt bad for making her feel bad. Please update soon. Edited December 18, 2008 by Jody Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 You guys are all too good. Not good for me! But yes, there will be trouble in paradise soon, but I won't say how soon or how and why, or how long it'll last. Is it wrong that I kept wishing everytime they got annoyed, or irritated with each other that it would turn into a full blown fight? You're really dying for the angst, aren't you? It'll come soon enough... Thank you all for the comments. They really make me want to keep on writing xoxo Quote
rokkafella125 Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 (edited) this was so good i loved loved it!!: You cut me.” Aden stated, looking at his hand where blood had started to seep out of the wound. “Well, if you hadn’t kept on taking my food, I wouldn’t have had to keep pushing your hand away.” She defended herself, trying to take his hand with hers so that she could see the wound herself. “Whoa, you keep away!” He exclaimed, jumping away from her before she could touch him. “Crazy, knife-welding woman.” sorry i havent replied in ages but the last couple of chapters have been really good! You guys are all too good. Not good for me! But yes, there will be trouble in paradise soon, but I won't say how soon or how and why, or how long it'll last. noo i was quite enjoying all the fluff! please dont make it too bad though! update soon! x Edited December 18, 2008 by rokkafella125 Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Angst??? awwww noooo!!! You know how much i love fluff, why the drama?? Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Because too much fluff can get boring! And nothing's ever so good in Summer Bay for long. Gotta keep it realistic Quote
Jody Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 (edited) You're really dying for the angst, aren't you? It'll come soon enough... I truly love angst but only when it's written extremely well and still manages to keep the characters completely in character throughout the scene. There are only a few writers on this site who can pull that off and you're one of them. I think back to the Drew/Belle fight in Untroubled and the Aden/Belle angst from there too and it makes me even more excited for it. Oh and your fluffly scene are never boring. Even if theres been alot. Edited December 18, 2008 by Jody Quote
karenp Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Great update. I'm looking forward to the next update. Quote
matilda Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Sorry I haven't been commenting for a while- too much xmas madness The last couple of chapters have been great! I particularly loved the one with the scan- so gorgeous Ahh I can't stand angst. But you're absolutely right- nothing is normal in Summer Bay! Quote
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