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That was great.

The guy does seem an awful lot like Aden which is maybe why Belle's not that scared of him?!?!

No matter who it is Aden's not going to be happy that Belle's been seeing random people behind his back.

Loved the drama and fluff...it was a nice mix of it.

Can't wait for the next chapter now!

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:o why? it was all going so well with all the fluff! :lol:

I really dont like that Guy, I was thinking it could be Aden's brother?

I'm actually scared about whats going to happen :(

Update soonxx

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Haven't commented for ages the fluff was all really sweet, but although I hate to admit it I really loved this bit, like the stranger turning up (you need some one to dislike) and adding some mystery and tension. Looking forward more angst, well nothing goes well for long.

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Excellent update! I really loved the balance you achieved between the fluff and the angsty stuff! You described the new character really well and have me really intrigued! I loved Belle's reactions to him too, you described them perfectly! I was thinking all the way through that it could be Aden's brother too but i can't wait to find out who he really is!

Update soon! :D

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