LAURZY! Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Belle HAS to tell him! she cant lie to save her life lol I dont like angst Brill update as per chick Loved Mattie Cant wait to read more!!! Quote
wrongturntaken Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Belle really should tell him, but i like that it's causing a bit more angst in the story and is a bit more believable than them being so perfect all the time (Not that i don't love that). I feel that this is a real issue that has developed and is the first one they'll eventually have to face in their marriage. And it'll be the first one that's arisen between them that won't be so easy to run away from because they are married. You write Belle keeping secrets very well, all of her actions seemd completely believable and i like how you had Mattie as the voice of reason. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Great update once again! I feel really sorry for Belle! god knows how Aden is gonna react! The baby kicked, how sweet Lol at Nicole and Geoff Looking forward to reading more Quote
leah1234 Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 "anyway whats the worst that could happen" famous last words. i think she is right to tell him but I hope he doesn't get too mad update soon xxxxxxx Quote
Louise_2983 Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Aww @ her failure to make him a cake for his 21st and him saying he only wanted one thing anyway Don't apologise for not having chapters full of angst - the fluff is too good Quote
karenp Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Just caught up with the last couple of chapters, poor belle when aden finds out about his brother. Great update Quote
wrongturntaken Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 I do love the angst, but your fluff is too good to miss! Excellent chapter, I loved Mattie making sure Belle could see the opposing view in anything she was thinking of. I'm glad Belle wants to tell Aden, i'm really intrigued to see what his reaction will be. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! Quote
Jody Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Just read the last two chapters. It reminded me why I love Mattie so much in this fic. She can be so girly and cute sometimes but then so mature. I loved her advice to Belle. And the fact that shes not willing to just say what Belle wants to hear. Shes not afraid to say what she really feels. I'm surprised when Mattie mentioned all the times Belle kept secrets and it backfired on her she didn't mention the one about not telling Drew about the baby. She did it to cause less stress and instead ended up hurting him more than anything. I think thats whats going to happen with Aden has well. I hope by the time Mattie has to decide whether to go to Perth the fic will be coming to an end. Because I don't want Mattie to go anywhere. The only people who are really hilarious and make me laugh just imagining them saying and doing some of the stuff they do in this fic, apart from Aden and Belle, are Amanda, Mattie, Ric, and Drew(can't believe how funny I find him when I despise him on the show). Most of the others have their moments but a majority of the time it feels too forced and the scenes don't even have a purpose for being there but just feels like when a author puts it in because they wanted to include them for the sake of it. So with Amanda and Drew not around all that much and Ric only making a cameos here and there Mattie is the only one(along with Aden and Belle ofcourse) I count on for the comedy. She was awesome in the last two chapters. The converstaion with Mattie made me warm to Belle a little. I don't love her just yet but it was nice to see her suffer with the desicion she made. Seeing her feel guilty for what she did reminded me of what a good person she is. Also surprised when she realised that maybe having Justin in Adens life could be a good thing. I do hope someday Justin gets the apology he deserves from her. Belles reasoning was alot better here. I still don't like the way she treated him but she came of a little more likeable here. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Lise Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 I like that, a lot! I wonder if those are famous last words, as well. Fluff is good, fluff is always good! Can't wait for the next chapter, now! Quote
Zetti Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Aww Belle and Aden fluff Want angst but fluff is so cool Quote
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