LAURZY! Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 Of course he still cares!!! lol Honestly that was amazing! i absolutely loved it I quite like Drew's protective side, you can kinda understand it Poor Belle, it must be doing her head in they really need to talk soon *hint* just kidding Brill update as per hun! Quote
leah1234 Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 so depressing but loved it!!!!! i'm glad their honeymoon period is over because angst is good(sometimes) before belle thought it i was thinking it too about aden only being there for the baby you write the tension that they feel so well great update once again update soon xxxxxxxx Quote
xknomex Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 Thats so sad!!! They need to talk to each other, say something, anything! Please!!!! However Belle is wrong, of course he cares for her as well as the baby!!!!! once again an outstanding chapter! xxx Quote
Jody Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 (edited) Whether it was filler or not, this chapter was one of my favourites. The silence was so much more effective than all the shouting and screaming would have been. I loved that you did it this way. Especially loved how devoid of emotion he was around her , but still showed signs of caring when it came to the baby. It felt so in character. The tension was even getting to me, so there were so many times when I just wanted say 'just say something for gods sake' out loud. Yet I still loved that they remained this way. I really can't express how much I enjoyed the entire part from the time he came home. It was brilliant. During this chapter I completely forgot that I don't like Belle at the moment. I think I have officially warmed to her again. Good Drew and Belle scene. But it was completely overshadowed, for me, by the Aden and Belle scenes. Please update soon. Edited January 5, 2009 by Jody Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 That was amazing! (No surprises there really!) I really liked the tension and how you described every bit of the silence. I love Aden's reactions, it felt so realistic, but still; it was so sad! Please update soon! (More angst is good, but don't ever forget the fluff! (as if you could)) can't wait! (but if you've got too much on, don't worry, i'll be waiting impatiently.) Quote
karenp Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 Thats one of my favorite chapters so depressing but great. Cant wait for the next update. Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 Unfortunately not. I have been triyng to write this chapter for a bit now, but it's not coming out right. Hopefully tomorrow. Sorry! Thanks for asking, though. xoxo Quote
leah1234 Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 that's fine, i understand completely update whenever you can xxxxxxx Quote
rfran Posted January 5, 2009 Report Posted January 5, 2009 Love silence tension and the shear pent up emotion that it conveys so strongly after a disagreement. loved this chapter you may have felt it was filler but it says so much about where there head's are at. It was so strong. Quote
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