Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 Ahh Taniya.. can't wait for Part 2 Poor Aden.. hes going to be so devastated when Belle finally tells him hope hes ok with it Quote
karenp Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 Aww poor aden he's really gonna feel so bad about this. Great update as always looking forward to the next update Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 GASP!!! I love how you did that, [i was leaning in to the screen as i read!] i could just completely imagine that Belle wouldn't say anything and Aden would figure it out on his own! I wonder if she'll tell him the whole truth now, he's gonna feel so bad... Can't wait for more, please put the next chapter up tonight! Please! please please please please!!!!!!! Quote
Zetti Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 Aden is going to be devasted as he realises it was his doing, but that chapter was done really well and I love the way you wrote Belle's emotions and how she didnt fear him despite the fact he was inflicting pain upon her. I hope Aden doesnt beat himself up too much about it, he didnt mean to do but knowing Aden he will hate himself. Quote
Lise Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 Oh dear! Aden's going to feel so guilty. She probably should have told him years ago. Loved how you wrote the whole thing, though. Absolutely can't wait for wait for part b now! Quote
rfran Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 Aden is going to be really hurt but he needed to find out about his nightmares and how they hurt Belle hope he finds a way round this a doesn't beat himself up to much Quote
rfran Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 (edited) Oh poor Aden he's beating himself up so much and self flagellation is just so unattractive (as an exponent myself), Belle seems to spend her whole time defending herself for hiding things and this time I feel she may have been justified she can't say she wasn't warned right from the first time. Like how this ties back to your previous fic. Having a long word moment!!!! Edited January 18, 2009 by rfran Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Awww Aden! That was heartbreaking!! Loved the whole convo between them, really well written Dont know why you weren't sure about it chick, thought it was brilliant Quote
bikinikill Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 this was great. except it was so sad. i feel really sad, sad for aden and for belle. i hope they are ok. Quote
Lise Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 There was absolutely nothing wrong with that, at all. It was really was heartbreaking. You almost had me in tears. Quote
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