leah1234 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 aaw poor aden!!! i think he needs a hug right now i think you went to the right point in the conversation so that aden and justin didn't just completely open up without any hesitation well done, great update can't wait for part b!!!!! update soon xxxxxxx Quote
xknomex Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 yay it was in purple again Loved that chapter, the talk between Justin and Aden was written brilliantly. core dear Tanyia, every single chapter that last line always brings me to tears Loved the bit of fluff at the beginning and the fact that Aden acknowledged things weren't right between them... update soon xxx Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 It was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously that talk between Justin and Aden was so so so SO PERFECT!!!!!!!!! That last line, i could just about see it coming that he wanted that but you paced it so well. I loved the start with Aden and Belle! You just portray the way their feeling so well in how you write! Can't wait for the next update!!! Oh, P.s. Taniya, I have the court date... Quote
jenpen08 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 oooh great update Taniya! sooo good! Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Great update Taniya Can't wait for Part B! Quote
Lise Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 I want to give Aden a hug now. I like that Aden is starting to acknowledge the tension between him and Belle now. Bring on Part B! Quote
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 O wow great update taniya Loved Aden and Justins talk... hope they can sort things out Quote
bikinikill Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 taht was really great. the talk between aden and justin was fantastic. i think its exactly right. i'm really looking forward to the aftermath, and part b. Quote
Zetti Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 I am so glad he spoke to Justin about it and they kind of cleared the air. Poor Aden, I wanted to hug him Quote
Louise_2983 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 (edited) Awwwwwwwwwwwwww my line was so sweet! I'm pretending he was saying it to me. Belle who? Edited January 29, 2009 by Louise_2983 Quote
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