Inactive User Posted March 8, 2010 Report Posted March 8, 2010 I had been reading this fanfiction. Wow great stuff and well-written. Poor Rachel Glad Leah and Tony are there for her. Mark's such a lowlife. He deserves to go to jail for what he did to her. More soon please Quote
flyingwithoutwings Posted March 26, 2010 Report Posted March 26, 2010 A month without this fic is far too long! And it was on the THIRD page! Haha. I really hope Rachel's okay. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 30, 2010 Report Posted April 30, 2010 So glad you've updated, I wondered where this one had got to.That was a superb update, I loved all the interaction between Tony, Rachel and Leah, it felt completely believable and I could really imagine it happening like that in the show.Ending's got me slightly worried, hoping that's not Leah about to do something stupid.Then again, there seem to be quite a few candidates... Quote
erin_bo_berrin Posted May 1, 2010 Report Posted May 1, 2010 thank you SOOOO much for the update Kirsty!! Wonderful stuff cant wait for the next chapter Quote
charmed60 Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Posted May 2, 2010 An update woo! It was so mean of you to leave us on that cliffhanger and then go on holiday for a month It really was worth the wait though I loved it all - Leah's reaction was very realistic and totally understandable I think that she would threaten Rachel like that. If she doesn't leave Mark after this then there's nothing any of them can do to help her anymore and it's a lot to expect them to watch her go through that pain. Tony was a complete sweetheart, I loved the way he was totally honest with her and was just there for her, putting his own anger, guilt etc feelings behind. Rachel breaking down was really heartbreaking and I'm pleased she opened up to Tony and finally admitted she was scared. I presume she's okay physically now but I think the mental damage is going to take a while to heal. Totally intrigued as to who has gone to confront Mark at the cliff - so exciting I can't wait to read!! It's nice Mark seems to have some sort of remorse but to me it still doesn't seem like it's enough to get him to change his ways. Please update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted May 2, 2010 Report Posted May 2, 2010 Glad you updated You wrote Leah and Tony's reactions really well. Poor Rachael Tony is such a sweetie comforting her More soon please Quote
suzannelgnz Posted May 4, 2010 Report Posted May 4, 2010 I am so glad that you updated, this chapter definitely fitted in Tony and Leah have continued to do so much for Rach which I think is fantastic. What I really want to know now is, who confronts Mark. Please don't leave it for so long this time Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted May 13, 2010 Report Posted May 13, 2010 Wow - brilliant chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Quote
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