Ordinary World (by HeavenForbid) - comments

[meant2live]

no way... hope Nicole is okay, I hope Aden didn't do it.

And Belle... noooo thats just not right!!!

Anyway loved it, very dramatic... can't wait for more everythings gotta be okay

[Taniya_K]

Poor Belle! And poor Aden!

I hope she opens up to someone other than her diary. I'm glad that you didn't kill Geoff off, but this reason for why that night was never going to be forgotten is still sad.

More soon please!

[LAURZY!]

Awww you cant kill Geoff!! lmao

Really hope Belle talks to someone soon!

Great update

[xknomex]

OMG Poor Belle!!!! I hope she talks to someone about what happened, its horrible!!

I'm glad Aden wasn't the one who hurt Nicole.

Update soon

xxx

[rfran]

Hope she finds someone to trust enough to open up too, or some one finds her writting and helps her that way.

Update soon

[whispered_envy]

Poor Belle! And poor Aden- he always seems to get blamed for stuff he didn't do! Dramatic but good stuff...keep it going!

[Taniya_K]

Nicole! I dunno if I want her to be pregnant or not... hmm...

Geoff... naughty naughty. I wonder what it was that he wanted to tell her. Was it that he likes her? I got that feeling because he ran off when she mentioned Aden.

Aden and Belle Even as friends their flirtatious

More soon please! I really want Belle to tell someone.

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

Awww i really thought Geoff was gonna tell her!!!

Hope Belle talks to someone soon aswell

Nicole!!

Great update, cant wait for more

[xknomex]

Naughty Geoff reading Belles diary!!

Nicole!!!!

I'm so glad Aden and Belle are friends! Its so sweet

Update soon

xxx

[rfran]

Well well Geoff reading Belles diary I'd like to say he shouldn't but from personal experiance he should, it may be the only way to coax what happened out of Belle.....

Nicole is so troubled isn't she

And then there's Aden pleased he's trying to sort himself out