matticus01 Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Posted October 23, 2009 am I first to comment again ? Loved it, you wrote that so well! Just a thought, but the link for the video, you should post it in the first chapter so people know there is a video to it as well brilliant, I really feel for Belle... update soon, this is amazing! Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 23, 2009 Report Posted October 23, 2009 I got a feeling that tonight’s gonna be a good night That tonight’s gonna be a good night That tonight’s gonna be a good, good night I love the lyircs Poor Belle she just wants to be accepted, Aden please fall for Belle I loved it, I can't wait for chapter 3!!!!!!! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Posted October 23, 2009 Oh boy, this is incredibly intense, I really can feel her pain and loneliness.I hope someone realises what Belle's doing to herself soon.Looking forward to more. Quote
amz89 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Posted October 23, 2009 I loved it, but im really sorry georgia, but i dont like how she cuts herself, i have had a lil too many experiences with stuff like that. Anyway sorry to say that. But the rest is really good. Nicole is a biarch. Quote
Georgia Posted October 23, 2009 Report Posted October 23, 2009 ^^ Sorry about that Amz. Ok guys, I just want to say that I'm sorry that this story is so dark and depressing at the moment, but I assure you it won't always be this way, so please stick with it. Quote
rocknroll Posted October 23, 2009 Report Posted October 23, 2009 oh my god! that was such a powerful chapter! not liking the way Belle is being treated update soon xx Quote
mbi615 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Posted October 24, 2009 (edited) I'm so glad I came to read this fic coz it is just so amazing and so powerful. And what makes it even more enjoyable is the fact that it pretty much mirrors the way school life is nowadays. I feel so sorry for Belle and cutting yourself is just a horrible way to deal with pain. I'm looking forward to reading more of this fic! And I love how you used the lyrics for 'I Gotta Feelin' coz they're perfect for the fic and it's an awesome song as well. Edited October 24, 2009 by mbi615 Quote
HeavenForbid Posted October 24, 2009 Report Posted October 24, 2009 Oh wow, very intense chapter. Your writing is fantastic, really loving this fiction. Quote
meant2live Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 I love it. It's very emotionally difficult subject to write about, but you're doing it extremely well. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 Good chapter... I think your writing is powerful and tremendous and you write this subject matter excellently and ok.. you included Roman so I officailly love you!!! Tele xxx Quote
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