HeavenForbid Posted October 31, 2009 Report Posted October 31, 2009 This is fantastic! That bit at the end was written so well! Last chapters were great. Poor Belle going back to cutting again Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 31, 2009 Report Posted October 31, 2009 I just read this entire fic, and wow! Simply, wow! It's just fantastic. And I mean, utterly, unbelieveably, fantastic. But also, so, so, sad. I really feel for Belle. The way you write, I can actually somehow feel what she's going through. That ending to the last chapter was too sad. I really though that she was making a progress, but I guess that last rejection was too much for her. Cannot wait for more. I hope she'll be ok, and that she'll be able to get the help that she needs now. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 31, 2009 Report Posted October 31, 2009 Poor Belle. I thought she was taking a few steps forward... This fic is brilliantly written though. You capture emotions perfectly! Looking forward to more. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You described everything so so well!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for you to update again, gosh Aden to the resuce Poor Belle, I could feel her emotion and I feel so sorry for her. I loved every word of that chapter, it was truly amazing!!!! The best chapter you've ever written. WOW I don't know how to describe in words how brilliant that chapter was. Please, please, please update soon!!! Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 Fantastic chapter, Georgia. Luckily Aden got there in time. I hope Belle will be ok. Looking forward to more. (My name's Reilly, btw ) Quote
Danni02 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 (edited) Wow, just wow. Brilliant couple of updates, you write things so well and clear. Aden to the rescue Edited November 4, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 Wow... I'm glad Aden was there... I'm always blown away by how good your writing is Gee... Keep going.. Love Tele Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 That was really well written, you could feel Belle's completely despair and self-loathing.Good job Aden found her(although how did he know where she lives..?).Hopefully she'll get some help now and be willing to accept it. You don't have a name for me?Isn't that strange? Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 Tan (I think I remember you saying I could call you that... ?) Yup, you certainly can call me that That chapter was just wow! I loved how you kept it from Belle's POV, even though she couldn't react or communicate in any way to Aden. Fantastic. Her thoughts were just so sad. Esp when she was glad that she was going to die, and how she hopes for another life that would be more interesting. I'm glad that Aden did help her, or least is trying to. Him crying was a great little addition. Is it because he's finally noticed her after being so rude, or because she was so hurt? Either way, it's was good. That last bit with Belle wishing that Aden would have just let her die was too sad. I hope they could perhaps start a friendship after this, but something tells me it's not going to be that easy esp with Nicole around. Can't wait for more! Please update soon! Quote
Hannah-K Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 wow that was really good . i loved belles thoughts about dying. aden coming to apologise to her was sweet and i am glad he didnt leave once he had seen belle. Quote
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