Dying For You To Notice Me (Georgia) - comments

[Georgia]

Just wanted to let you guys know that I have a writers blog... it contains sneak previews of my fictions, and other bits of information, previews of new fictions... stuff like that.

It also contains a sneak peek for Chapter 10...

The Blog

Just click the link and then scroll down to the part where it shows my blogs.

[matticus01]

I loved how we got to see both of their views... and it was a little refreshing

I'm so honored to be proofing this for you

well done... and cant wait for the next update!!!

[Red Ranger 1]

Another excellently written chapter, it was interesting to see how Belle saw events.Looking forward to more!

[adellejefferiesxox]

That was really good G

Don't leave me hanging too long

[matticus01]

awwwwwwwwwww

beautiful chapter Gee

I hope Belle will be ok... although I already know whats happening

update soon

[Red Ranger 1]

Hmm.It's good that Belle's happy and that Aden's there for her.I just hope she isn't setting herself up for another fall...

[silly_vanessa]

i agree, i hope aden's up to looking after her, she needs a lot of help and so will aden. but it's good that she's happy.

really well written. keep it up

[tessalove]

That was a really good chapter!!

Glad Belle got out!

And moving in with Aden! Aww! I hope the "break" is permanent or at least Aden leats Belle know what;s going on and stuff, I'd hate Belle to get hurt again!

Update soon! El x

[amz89]

aww I loved this.

Aden was so lovely to her.

Cant wait for more. x

[matticus01]

I wanted to ask him about his father, but I sensed that it was a long story for another day

“What’s your biggest fear?” he asked me, his eyes staring straight at the ceiling, and his body barely moving

“Dying before I’ve had a chance to live”

I love that bit... it would have to be my favourite out of the whole chapter

I also love the bicker and banter between Aden and Belle

perfect, update soon