silly_vanessa Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 i loved it. well done. was the last quote belle's thoughts? because if it she really needs to talk to someone about it. although, it is probably true of every girl. i love all the quotes you put it, they really sum up the chapter fantastically. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 Ooh, Aden and Belle are getting all domestic.She does seem happy so I'm just hoping that it lasts. Quote
tessalove Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 That was a brilliant chapter! So simple but amazing!! It was really sweet too.... El x Quote
HeavenForbid Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 Ooo, fab updates! I loved the last one, it was so cute at the end. Looking forward to more Quote
matticus01 Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Posted November 21, 2009 thank god Aden finally got through to her.... Nicole stupid so and so....! that last line 'I think I'm falling in love with you,' just made my heart melt update soon... pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.... well I know whats going on but..... pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!! Quote
rocknroll Posted November 21, 2009 Report Posted November 21, 2009 2 great updates! i love the Adelle but there at the end.. Aden is so sweet! update soon xx Quote
amz89 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Posted November 21, 2009 awww I loved that. how aden said he was in love with someone else to nic. I love the end as well. Can't wait for more. xx Quote
silly_vanessa Posted November 21, 2009 Report Posted November 21, 2009 thank goodness aden got to her in time, and that she let him. i think this is truley the turning point for belle, she's letting someone help her. update soon! Quote
matticus01 Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Posted November 21, 2009 *sigh* brilliant... I wish I had an Aden that was like that to me.... “It sounds perfect”, I say softly, smiling up at him, thanking my lucky stars for the miracle standing in front of me “It is perfect... just like you” that bit is just Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Posted November 21, 2009 Nice couple of updates.Breathed a sigh of relief when Aden managed to stop Belle cutting herself(and glad that he and Nicole parted on good terms, even though that isn't particularly important to the story...).Hopefully his attentions will help her come to value herself. Quote
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