Danni02 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 Great update! Oooo I want to know what Tony has planned! Please update soon! Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 20, 2009 Report Posted November 20, 2009 Really good update Ohh, wonder what Tony has planned Update soon! xoxo Quote
Danni02 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Posted November 22, 2009 Aww that was really sweet! Still have to wait to see what he has planned though! Update soon, I'm dying to know! Quote
suzannelgnz Posted November 22, 2009 Report Posted November 22, 2009 Sorry I didn't comment for the last 2 chapters This has been an awesome short fic Laura, and I especially loved the last chapter Harry chewing on the rose, Rachel finding out more about the suprise, Tony explaining things. "you’re here now that’s all that matters" Loved that quote Really looking forward to the final chapter. Quote
KirstyEkua Posted November 23, 2009 Report Posted November 23, 2009 Aww Laura i'm really enjoying this. It's such a sweet story with lots of mush but it has real depth to it too. I love how you've managed to combine the two realistically. I love the interaction between Leah and Rachel and you can actually imagine them talking to each other like that. You've really managed to bring out their personalities. As much as i love reading Tachel i also really enjoy anything that involves Leah and Rachel so this fic is perfect And i love all the cute mummy stuff with Harry. I liked that Rachel realised she doesn't need any reassaurance from Tony about his feelings for her. At first i wanted her to talk to him but then thinking about it you wrote it really well. Asking him would come across as being a little insecure and pathetic i think - it's good she's realised that he loves her and that's all she really needs to know. Rachel smiled as she watched her son guzzling from his bottle, his tiny fingers stroking her hand. “You’re so beautiful little boy, I love you so much do you know that?” she whispered kissing his forehead That put a really cute image in my head!! Awww Tony is such a romantic. I love that he's made this totally stupid mistake but all is forigven becasue he's just a total sweetheart. I can't wait to find out what he has planned for her!! Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 24, 2009 Report Posted November 24, 2009 This short fiction has been really good Laura It was a really sweet chapter Really like the interaction with Rachel & Leah, & the cute mummy stuff between Rachel & Harry & aw, Tony being romantic, he's such a sweetheart Looking forward to seeing what he has planned! Update soon xx Quote
Danni02 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Posted November 24, 2009 (edited) Aww. That was the best chapter ever! I loved that. It was so cute and lovely and sweet and ahh the presents! Putting the ring diamond into a necklace, so lovely and a great idea! Tony laughed, remembering how Harry wanted to touch everything but the imprint model. That made me laugh. Loved Harry's present. So cute. And a weekend away where they had their first date. Aww Tony! Aww and Harry wanted to open mummy's present! But Laura! I cant believe you left it there! You have to update it asap! Edited November 24, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 24, 2009 Report Posted November 24, 2009 Aw Laura, that was a brilliant chapter, was really lovely & sweet & I agree with what Danni said, putting the ring diamond into a necklace, it was a great idea also liked Harrys present, really cute & little Harry wanting to open his mums present, aww! & the weekend away where they had there first date Update soon, want to find out what happens next! xx Quote
suzannelgnz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Posted November 25, 2009 Laura, that was a beautiful first half of that chapter. Rach is soo lucky to have a hubby like Tony, and the description of Harry and the plaster imprint thing was hilarious! Definitely looking forward to the second half of this final chapter xx Quote
TachelHolden Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Posted November 25, 2009 Thats soo good awww how romantic is Tony? If only this happened in the actual show one of the things i love about Rach is shes happy with anything but her reaction to all the presents was really quite nice , its about time she was treated right. Love little harry i bet he will be soo cute when hes older , and Rach is a brilliant mum its like you can imagine this is real because it is so well written. Good job so looking forward to an update! Quote
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