matticus01 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 eeeeeeewwwwwww.... Colleen giving a lap dance :sick: But that was a great chapter Alf's comment made me update soon Quote
amz89 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 Loved that chapter, so funny. Poor Belle. Make Adelle No meantion of Martha? =( More soon please can't wait... I don't understand why Nic killed her. Quote
tessalove Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 Haha, That was so funny!! I love the Niff scene! It was hilarous!! Update soon!! El xx Quote
mbi615 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Posted October 16, 2009 What a hilarious chapter!! Ooh Irene and Miles must be the next 'hot' couple! Aww Aden and Belle are so funny and cute at the same time! My fave line is the one Bec quoted. The Nicole and Geoff scene has to be the funniest part of the whole story! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 Oh my, oh my, oh my.That was utterly, brilliantly hilarious.Irene has the hots for Miles(and maybe Geoff)!And his April Fool joke!And Geoff falling for Nicole because she kissed him on the cheek!Their whole conversation was brilliant, I was grinning all the way through it. Quote
amz89 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 Loved this. Love the whole act of Irene in this how u write he is amazing. Something different that's for sure. Wonder if anyone will find martha? Can't wait fo more. =) Quote
tessalove Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 Haha! A prostitute! Ha!! I totally love this!! Update soon! El xx Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 oooooo that was so awesome, loved the "sexual chapter" Loved Belle making Aden jealous, you could tell Geoff wasn't quite comfortable with the situation but he was willing to get even hehe. Quote
Adelle_fan1000 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 (edited) Colleen and Geoff Woah!! Edited October 25, 2009 by Adelle_fan1000 Quote
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