matticus01 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Posted December 8, 2009 hmmmmmmmmmmm.... Dont know how I feel about nicole lol.... But I too dont feel sorry for Annie, as Jai said he didn't force her, she told him she wanted to... but Nicole's cancer.... that is awful all the same! update soon Quote
Georgia Posted December 8, 2009 Report Posted December 8, 2009 Well, first of all, congratz on the amazing writing so far, and the great storyline. I've only just read this fic (don't know why I haven't opened this thread before now), and I love the story. Nicole and Jai, although freaked me out slightly at first (I thought they were just gonna go to the dance together, not "get it on"), it actually made a lot of sense. I liked how you delved into Nicole's thoughts after, and Jai's one-liners made me laugh I don't really feel sorry for Annie... I feel more sorry for Jai. She said that they could carry on, and now Annie's playing a victim card, and it looks like Jai has drawn the short straw... he's getting all the blame, and he looks set to lose Annie and Ruby as friends. And Nicole and her cancer I was expecting her to be pregnant, but when she said "after Belle" it started to click. Sorry for the long comment... can't wait for the next chapter Quote
tessalove Posted December 8, 2009 Report Posted December 8, 2009 Oh my! Poor Nic! I hope everything goes okay! Aww Annie! Nut it wasn't Jai's fault! Update soon! El Quote
Inactive User Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Posted December 8, 2009 Poor Nic! Hope she better be okay and needs everyone's support. Poor Jai. It's not his fault. More soon please Quote
Danni02 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Posted December 8, 2009 (edited) Great update. Pleased Nicole told Miles and Jai about the cancer. Update soon Edited December 8, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Posted December 8, 2009 I was worried that Nicole was going to go through it alone, but glad she has Miles and Jai. Still don't understand Annie. *sighs* An awesome update! Looking forward to the next one Quote
Georgia Posted December 9, 2009 Report Posted December 9, 2009 Glad that Nicole told Jai and Miles about the cancer, she shouldn't go through this alone. I feel so sorry for Jai Loved the chat between Jai and Xavier though, it was great to see some male bonding Can't wait for the next update Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Posted December 9, 2009 Great chapter. Poor Jai. I wanted to hug him. Loved the chat between Jai and Xavier Glad Nicole got Jai and Miles for support when she told them about her cancer. More soon please Quote
matticus01 Posted December 9, 2009 Report Posted December 9, 2009 beautiful update RR1... Am glad that Nicole finally told someone Still not feeling sorry for Annie though.... and Ruby's just... well i get that she's being over protective of her friend.... but Annie decided to sleep with Jai! brilliant, update soon Quote
rocknroll Posted December 9, 2009 Report Posted December 9, 2009 Great update! Thank god Nicole told someone.. hope everything is going to be okay update soon xx Quote
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