And Just Like That - Everything Changes (by KirstyEkua) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Nice update, you touched on all the different plotlines really well.Rachel struggling to cope was nicely done.Leah...is heading for a whole load of trouble.Martha is still struggling to cope in a different way. And I really hope it isn't so long before the next update...

[~Zoe~]

Naughty Leah

Martha.....

& I liked that scene with Tachel & Grace, it was very cute.

Good update Kirsty

[krfan4lyf]

OMG! Leah and Brad! When Rachel finds out it's sure going to be interesting

Loved the Tachel stuff

[Merli]

I read it today... Finally I had time.

It's GREAT! It's full of surprises, you are very good writer. Good job, waiting for the next one ;)

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh no!I was really relieved when Martha opened up to Rachel but she didn't hear...And now Martha's even worse.

Leah trying to hide Brad was a nice comic moment but I'm glad he turned round and told her she had to make a choice.

Glad you updated!

[Danni02]

Poor Martha she tried to talk to Rach but she was just to busy with the baby...

Doesnt look good for her.

Leah!

Cant believe she is with Hugo and Brad.Brad is right she needs to chose....

Update soon!

Edited October 24, 2009 by Danni02

[charmed60]

Yaaaaaay you updated Wow there's so much to comment on.

Firstly, I wanted to say how beautiful and sensitively you've written Martha's grief and self harming, it's heartbreaking to see her get the courage to talk to somebody about it and open up how she felt about her life and Rachel didn't notice what she said because of her own anxieties and struggles At first I thought I'd be annoyed with Rachel for not noticing Martha's pain but the way you wrote it allowed me to empathise with both characters in totally different ways, Rachel's so desperate to be a good Mum and get Grace settled, I'm glad she appeared to be doing that by the end of the chapter. I really hope someone saves Martha in time though, i hope its not too late!

Tony was the amazing father it's so sweet, I can imagine him with a daughter I loved how you described his feelings of wanting to come home to be with his 'girls' and how he rushed to see Grace after giving Rachel a cuddle. It was just nice to have that little happy, family scene in amongst all the other grief and anger going on with the other characters.

Leah! Saucy minx!! I'm not feeling the Hugo love from her and I actually quite like the thought of her and Brad, I'm glad he wasn't happy with the whole betrayal thing and I hope she'll make a choice soon. I'd like to see some scenes between Brad and Rachel with Grace, I do miss the sibling relationship they had on the show.

Amazing update, please update again soon I love this fic

[~Zoe~]

Poor Martha, it does'nt look too good for her

& Leah Brads right, she needs to make a choice

Good update Kirsty

[suzannelgnz]

Whoa, Kirstys fic has finally been updated

Poor Martha, struggling so much but still trying to do the right thing for herself

Naughty Leah, tell Hugo the truth and move forward.

I'd love for you to update this fab fic soon

[Danni02]

Martha!

Loved the chat with Leah and Rach!

Wonder who Leah will chose...

Edited November 3, 2009 by Danni02