Rollercoaster (by bradyell) - comments

[xknomex]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

*gets on knees* please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

let Aden be okay!!!!!!!!!!

apart from the ending i loved every second!!!!

update ASAP!

[xknomex]

OMG.

*breathes*

“if it was anybody else I’d probably be the first to shout them down but I’m not crazy! If he was dead I’d know, my heart would know. It beats for him, every breath I take is for him!”

that line.... wow. seriously that was just wow. written like a true writer.

the whole chapter was just heartbreaking, had me in tears through out.

that last line, let out a massive sigh of relief, i'm soooooooooooooooo happy they found him. so so happy!

cannot wait till the next chapter! xxxxxx

[hitmanfan]

Oh Ellen

so sad, crying again, and please let him be safe - how could you leave it there - you never said in what state they've found him )

Edit: snap Naomi, it was that section that made me cry

Edited November 12, 2009 by hitmanfan

[amz89]

Oh sad chapter, please let him be alive. Cant wait for more, im busting to know what happens now. update ASAP Pretty please.

[bubbleburst]

Oh!! That was just brilliant. Please make everything okay! More sooon please

[Inactive User]

This is really good. Sorry I had not been catching up with this lately at the moment. I got stuff on my mind at the moment.

Let Aden be okay please

More soon please

[Niara]

Loving this Fic!!!

Beau just has to be the cutest kid eva

That chapter was great and the way you wrote Belle in that chapter was spot on and very well done.

Please make Aden ok so they can quickly be a happy family again!

[xknomex]

Oh my word!!!!!!

yay that he's okay, i really thought the worse when he was wheeled in..

the thing that brought me to tears though, Nic Nac... woah. that Beau is one special boy!

and omg at the end... i realllly need to find me an Aden.

brilliantly written...

Can't wait for more!

[amz89]

oh yaahhhhhhh

Loved this aden is amazing, cant wait for more. =]

Great update

[Adelle_fan1000]

Oh yay... nice to kno hes alive