hitmanfan Posted January 19, 2010 Report Posted January 19, 2010 oh wonderful conversations and LOVED the ending with Jax and Aden Quote
matticus01 Posted January 20, 2010 Report Posted January 20, 2010 that was beautiful... I loved the beginning... it stung tears in my eye and made my heart reach out to Aden I'm glad that Aden's grandfather didn't touch Jax... so glad... that last line made me grin... update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 20, 2010 Report Posted January 20, 2010 That was utterly brilliant.I loved the conversation between Aden and Belle at the start, I'm glad Aden isn't retreating into his shell and lashing out at people but is realising Jackson's the priority.And that conversation with Jackson was pitch perfect, the way they explained everything to him and the way he reacted to it.Can't wait to see what happens next. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Posted January 21, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Posted January 21, 2010 I was foolish enough to not click on the options and click on the track this topic so I didn't get the updates coming through to my inbox! *slaps forehead!* But now that I've caught up, I just wanted to say....WOW! You have written Aden so well, all the emtions he was going through, and everything else. He's really lucky to have Belle there to support him all through it. I just loved the talk between Aden & Jax - this line is my favourite so far...“He hurt my daddy and I don’t like people who hurt my daddy!” Just brilliant and I can't wait to see where you're going with this...its shaping up to be a great story! Quote
Georgia Posted January 22, 2010 Report Posted January 22, 2010 Loved the ending “He hurt my daddy and I don’t like people who hurt my daddy!” ^^ I think that's my favourite line in this fic so far. This chapter was brilliant. It doesn't seem like you were under the influence of medication when you wrote it; it's that good! Can't wait to see what happens next.. update soon Quote
amz89 Posted January 22, 2010 Report Posted January 22, 2010 “He hurt my daddy and I don’t like people who hurt my daddy!” I loved this bit too. I love this fic your fics are always awesome and so much emotion. I love it. Can't wait for more. =) Hope your feeling better too. Poor Aden. =( Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 24, 2010 Report Posted January 24, 2010 Brilliant update Ellen Poor Aden i'm guessing things arent going to get much easier for him either?! Loving this fic so far, really looking forwrad to seeing what happens next!! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Posted January 24, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
xknomex Posted January 24, 2010 Report Posted January 24, 2010 soooooooooo gooood Ellen! the bit in the diner was really sad.. dont like that comment that Aden made about killing his grandfather, i hope that doesn't come back on him! the bit with Nicole was so sweet I especially loved Aden's comments about pregnant woman! Eden and the lolly pop was just adorable! update sooon! xx Quote
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