HighwayUnicorn Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Posted March 22, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
xknomex Posted March 22, 2010 Report Posted March 22, 2010 eeek they're all innocent! whooop! Nicole totally did the right thing... he deserved to die! and whoop that the investigation has been closed... whoop! now everyone can live happily ever after!!!! that bit with Aden and Fliss was so adorbale. love a tiny bit of fluff... the question is... how are Aden and Belle gonna celebrate? maybe some Racy Fluff?? *nudge nudge wink wink* hehehe Brilliant update! xxx Quote
matticus01 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Posted March 23, 2010 I'm getting an inkling that this isn't the end of it... but maybe it is and i'm just over working my brain Brilliant chapter, I'm glad Nicole walked away and left Aden's grandfather there to die... it is what he deserves! I loved the small piece of fluff with Aden and Fliss, they are soooooooooooooo cute... Amazing chapter, please update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Posted March 23, 2010 Loved the characterisation of Nicole, the way she was just completely blase about everything.Like everyone else, I'm wondering if it's really as simple as that or if the post mortem's going to show something...Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote
bradyell Posted March 28, 2010 Report Posted March 28, 2010 (edited) Sorry if you popped in thinking there was an update but i just wanted to let you guys know that there might be more of a delay than usual with the next one! Hard to believe i know, they always take ages!!! Thing is my goddaughter is 3 tomorrow and today we threw the party of all parties for her and it has taken all my time this last week helping to get things ready for that and next weekend i have my family coming to stay for easter - 6 kids, 1 aunt, 1 uncle, 3 bedroomed house - you guys do the math! so yeah, lots to do this week too! I'll fit in as much writing as i can so please bare with me And whilst i'm hear waffling away i just wanna thank you all again for the lovely reviews that you write! I really do appreciate and cherish them all Thank you very muchly to each and every one of you. x x x x x x x x x x x Edited March 28, 2010 by bradyell Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Posted March 28, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
xknomex Posted April 7, 2010 Report Posted April 7, 2010 awww it was perfect!!!! i hope Geoff doesn't find out... cause that would just be too sad to see anything happen to Nic and Geoff! Eden and Jax were so funny, but soo cute! she's so like Nicole hehe. glad Aden's sorting everything out.. seeing a counsellor and everything tis good. hope everythings all okay now brilliant update! Quote
yaz88 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Posted April 7, 2010 That was brilliant awww Protective Aden and caring Belle, sweet =) Nic shouldn't feel guilty or like it was the wrong thing to do, i agree with everyone else, that they would have done the same thing. I wonder if Geoff will ever find out the whole truth, i dont think he would take it well and it might leave Eden with split up parents Only one chapter left are you doing a sequel? i think i read somewhere that you were... Looking forward to the final chapter Xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Posted April 7, 2010 Nice update.I like how, even with what happened sorted out, the situation still isn't over.Although I guess if there's only one chapter to go it is nearly over...Be interesting to see how they all cope with the aftermath. Quote
matticus01 Posted April 8, 2010 Report Posted April 8, 2010 Amazing chapter, Eden and jax were so cute with their bickering and banter And Nic shouldn't feel guilty, but yes Geoff does tend to see things in only black and white with no gray at all! I cant believe there's only one chapter left, I do wonder how it will end Quote
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