amz89 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Posted January 25, 2010 OMG you cant leave it like that, loved all the emotion, u need to update ASAP. Aden doesnt look to happy with Nicole. Um hello she could love one way he saved bens life. Cant wait for more. =] Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 27, 2010 Report Posted January 27, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
amz89 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Posted January 27, 2010 Oh amazing. Nic better tell Aden the truth. Aw shes awake, you keep leaving it in really bad cliffhangers I want more. x Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Posted January 27, 2010 Just wow...that was a very emotional chapter yet again! Awww...poor Aden - I really hope that Aden and Belle sort it out somehow...they really need to talk properly. Update soon, don't keep us waiting for too long! Awesome! Quote
Stephanie Posted January 27, 2010 Report Posted January 27, 2010 I've been reading this for a while and I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying it. I love the story and I love new characters you've introduced. Can't wait to find out what will happen next! Great update! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Posted January 27, 2010 Good update.Nicole's now clued up but she's still hiding the whole truth from Aden and I can see him being annoyed when he finds out.Good that Belle's awake but it's not looking too good for her in either the short or the long term... Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted January 29, 2010 Report Posted January 29, 2010 I enjoyed that, even though it was quite sad. Nice chapter Quote
amz89 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Posted January 29, 2010 aww there together, they were so cute, poor belle. Cant wait for more loving it. =] x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Posted January 29, 2010 Oh, that was brilliant.I smiled at Aden thinking it was a good job Belle hadn't vomitted on him.I like that even though Belle's willing to accept Aden as her boyfriend she still isn't entirely comfortable with him(and Nicole interrupting them was well-timed).I think you're doing a really good job of progressing their relationship without forgetting what happened. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 29, 2010 Report Posted January 29, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
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