Red Ranger 1 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Posted January 31, 2010 That was a brilliantly written chapter, I loved every part of it.Aden refusing to acknowledge the truth and continuing to pretend with Belle, then accepting that she has to know.Nicole and Jasmine being there for her.Belle's continued inability to tell Aden she shares his feelings and his realisation that it's not important.Oh-and Belle knitting, which I really should have mentioned before... Quote
Stephanie Posted January 31, 2010 Report Posted January 31, 2010 Thanks for updating! I love the way you describe Aden's feelings in this chapter, especially this line: How was he supposed to talk to her about her own death? Was he supposed to sit next to her, hold her hand, lean in and whisper: ‘Cameron told me that you were going to die soon, so I think we should discuss that’? It really resonated with me, it shows how hard it is for Aden. It was so sad. I'm glad Belle finally knows though. I'm also glad she told Cameron to ask Nicole on a date! Looking forward to reading more! Quote
HeavenForbid Posted January 31, 2010 Report Posted January 31, 2010 So sorry I haven't commented in so long! I have come on every couple of days seeing if there were any updates on fics, I don't know how I managed to miss like 6 lmao. Great fic! I love how this turned out I didn't see all of this coming. The cancer back and Ben is better now. Your writing is fantastic. I'm looking forward to the next update. Quote
tessalove Posted February 1, 2010 Report Posted February 1, 2010 I finally caught up! Sorry it took me so long to comment! Not having your own laptop sucks! Amazing chapters! I loved them! Its getting soo sad! But it's so beautifully written the emotion is so clear and amazing!! Loved all the chapters! Update soon! El x Quote
amz89 Posted February 5, 2010 Report Posted February 5, 2010 that was so sad, poor aden and belle. Im going to sound dumb but what is that word u used at the end i never heard it before? Not to meantion im half asleep =( Is it something to turn off her support or something? Cant wait for an update. Quote
tessalove Posted February 5, 2010 Report Posted February 5, 2010 Aww That was so sad Resusitate is like bringing the person back to life, like giving the CPR, (I think atleast) Really amazing story! I've loved it the whole way through! El x Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted February 5, 2010 Report Posted February 5, 2010 I couldn't belive it! How have I missed this so many times? A lot to catch up! And now I'm caught up....and awww poor Belle, poor Aden, poor Nicole... You wrote such really emotional chapters which made me feel choked at times *sniffs* Can't wait for the next update! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 5, 2010 Report Posted February 5, 2010 Oh gosh.I loved that and the ending did make me catch my breath.I loved the chat between Belle and Nicole and especially Belle's thoughts about not leaving anything behind:It's as if even though she gave Ben life, she thinks Nicole made him the person he is.I'm really looking forward to knowing how you end this. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted February 5, 2010 Report Posted February 5, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Stephanie Posted February 6, 2010 Report Posted February 6, 2010 Oh, it's all so sad!! Poor Belle, I wish she could spend more time with Ben. That scene between them was lovely. Those two chapters were great, can't wait to see what you do with the last one. x Quote
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