HeavenForbid Posted December 11, 2009 Report Posted December 11, 2009 Aww, Nic and Cameron were cute together (: I loved Belle and Aden on the phone, they seemed happy, like all was forgiving for a minute. And Aden's last line Please update soon. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Posted December 11, 2009 Loved the insight into Nicole, again all her thoughts rang completely true and her relationship with the doctor is quite cute.I like the way that being a parent to Ben seems to have been hard but worthwhile. Aden and Belle do just seem to have slid back into their old relationship, which could cause a few problems with other people... Quote
Inactive User Posted December 11, 2009 Report Posted December 11, 2009 Liking this fanfiction. More soon please Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 Oh gosh.That was lump in the throat fantastic.Aden's reaction to seeing his son was just heartbreaking and then bringing in Belle too and them both realising how much they've missed out on and how much their actions have affected other people.I am worried though that if they bond too much with Ben then either the two of them or Nicole are going to end up badly hurt... Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 Oh my like RR1 said that was heartbreaking, not at all cheesy, it was written perfectly, Ben and Aden's first meeting. So emotional! Can't wait for the next update. Quote
rocknroll Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 wow! that was an amazing update! I loved the emotion in it! It nearly had me crying! Loved Aden and Belle's reaction why do I get the feeling someone is going to get badly hurt!? update soon xx Quote
amz89 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 aww i loved that chapter, so beautiful. I can picture it now. Aww poor irene. Please let aden and belle together, Jed stay outta it!!! Cant wait for more xx Cant remember if I reviewed the chapter before this but it was great too. X Quote
HeavenForbid Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 That was fantastic. I have to agree with the others, someone is going to get hurt...And I think it could be Nicole. After all those years, she has a bond with Ben. Now Belle and Aden are back, they'll want to get to know their son, even if Ben isn't aware of who his real parents are. Please update soon! Quote
dee83 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Posted December 12, 2009 Great so far I hope Aden and Belle get back together at least for their sons sake and I hope that Jed stays away Can`t Wait for the next chapter Quote
tessalove Posted December 13, 2009 Report Posted December 13, 2009 Ok First Aww, Aden and Ben's chat was very cute! And aww Geoff being the Dad! I loved that But Irene And all of them left That was a brill update! El x Quote
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