Scotcaz22 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Posted December 13, 2009 Oh, my god - that was heart-breaking - so emotional! I just...wow...my eyes are watering up at the scene between Ben, Belle and Aden. Just...wow! Can't wait for the next update! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Posted December 13, 2009 Wow - the breakfast scene was hilarious - orange juice coming out of Aden's nose - I laughed so hard! But my favourite part of this chapter has to be the conversation between Belle and the doctor - that was really emotional! I loved this line: “Last night, I tucked my son in for the first time ever... he told me I looked like a princess... I still couldn’t hug him and tell him that I loved him. Remember that whenever you think that I’m a selfless, strong person” It really hit home for me as a reader, to realise that Belle actually have thought about Ben over the years. A great piece of writing! (awww, and I have to wait for 2 weeks for an update! but hey, have an awesome time on holiday and when you get back, update, update!! ) Quote
amz89 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 I loved this was so good, full of emotion. Enjoy your holiday cant wait to read more. X Quote
matticus01 Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Posted December 14, 2009 I'm hoping you ahve fun on your holiday and I cant wait to see what you buy me I think this is one of the best stories I've read in months... so that is something to be proud of and I can see from the comments that this is a very emotional fic that they are reading as well... and your not just pushing anything aside either....! brilliant once again... and as I said before... have fun on your holiday Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 WHOA that was really good. It's good Belle is getting tested even though she can't help her son. I'm liking the cute moments between Belle and Aden. You can see Nicole doesn't want to let go of Ben. Poor Belle Poor Ben Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 Cameron Welsh?!Can't believe I didn't notice that before.Loved that chapter, Ben's a real cutie, I grinned when he blurted out that Nicole had a crush on Cameron.Bit worried about Belle trying to hide the pain she's in, I suspect either Aden or Nicole will notice something before too long. Definitely be reading when you come back! Quote
Danni02 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 Great couple of updates. Have a great holiday. Quote
tessalove Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 That was a brillinat update!! It was really powerful and full of emotion! I hope that Aden is a match! Poor Belle, all she wants to do is help! :/ Have a great holiday, can't wait until you come back! Love you!!! El xxxx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
HeavenForbid Posted December 14, 2009 Report Posted December 14, 2009 Fantastic update! Really showed how much Belle does care for her son. Hope you have a great holiday, we'll all be here waiting for an update when you get back Quote
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