southsrock_123 Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 hey kacie i am going to update on these little wonders in a minute i just thought i would comment on this fic. i like the use of english here, it sounds like me with the bogan like talking. HA Quote
Tasha Posted June 7, 2007 Author Report Posted June 7, 2007 awww...poor Martha Jacky is so sweet listening to her. Great chapter More please Quote
southsrock_123 Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 Great Chapter Kacie Jack and Martha are going to realise how much they truly love each other and fall in love. thats how the story goes, isnt it KACIE Quote
beckyboo Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 Poor Martha!!!!!!!!!!! :( I dont no what else to say Update soon xxxxx Quote
puja Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 Martha has had it really hard; bless her I hate that Paul Jack is the best listener, ever But, I hope she tells Soph. It will help her to understand Martha better and maybe her anger will subside. Excellent chapter; can't wait to read more! Quote
kaciexox Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 here are some spoilers for th enext chapter which will be up tomorrow : Quote After that talk, I felt better…it was weird feeling…like I was whole again. I truly believed at that moment that I could start my life again on a clean slate. That I could somehow finally forget my past and move on with my life. I was wrong… Quote The next morning I woke to the sound of shouting voices. Quote “Jack…” I began. “Yea,” he said, looking out to sea. “Yesterday, I wasn’t being completely honest with you…” Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important? Quote
Sam =) Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 Aww he's so sweet listening to her like that, stuff Sophie Poor Martha Update soon Quote
Tasha Posted June 7, 2007 Author Report Posted June 7, 2007 (edited) Quote Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important? If Martha does know her from somewhere, then i'd say she is of some significance, and you could bring her in. And Martha wasnt completely honest? oh gosh, what more could there be?? Edited June 7, 2007 by Tasha Quote
vale4eva Posted June 7, 2007 Report Posted June 7, 2007 kaciexox said: here are some spoilers for th enext chapter which will be up tomorrow : Quote After that talk, I felt better…it was weird feeling…like I was whole again. I truly believed at that moment that I could start my life again on a clean slate. That I could somehow finally forget my past and move on with my life. I was wrong… Quote The next morning I woke to the sound of shouting voices. Quote “Jack…” I began. “Yea,” he said, looking out to sea. “Yesterday, I wasn’t being completely honest with you…” Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important? Great chapter Kacie Martha really has had it bad, poor girl *bug hug for Martha* The spoilers are interesting, I dont like the way it said 'I was wrong' though, cause it sounded all positive but now .... Anyhoo, looking forward to more Quote
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