Jen Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 Not at all! I really liked that part. The way you wrote it was great, especially the sudden rush before the story fell back into the present. Nice work! Quote
*caitie* Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 thankyou!that's a releif!! the next update will probably be tomorrow Quote
Liska Posted August 15, 2007 Report Posted August 15, 2007 I think it's a great fic. Nice chapters Quote
Jen Posted August 16, 2007 Report Posted August 16, 2007 Really good, Caitie. You write Lucas' P.O.V really well. I also liked the flashback. Keep up the good work Quote
Jen Posted August 17, 2007 Report Posted August 17, 2007 Oooh ... predicting the future. Very interesting. He still looked cute when he was running. Aww ... cute. I'm a sucker for a Mattie/Lucas pairing Quote
Jen Posted August 23, 2007 Report Posted August 23, 2007 Another great chapter. Your descriptions are becoming more detailed, the more you write. Can't wait to see where you take this next. I hope Lucas can save Tony! Quote
Jen Posted August 29, 2007 Report Posted August 29, 2007 Another great chapter. So wait - Lucas has a brother! And two guys are being paid to kill him? This is getting confusing! but great work. Very intriguing. Can't wait to read more. Quote
*caitie* Posted August 30, 2007 Report Posted August 30, 2007 The brother on the picture was Jack. It was taken when Lucas was on the beach on the first day and Jack came to him telling him to go home. Ans yes, those two men want to kill Lucas Quote
Jen Posted August 30, 2007 Report Posted August 30, 2007 Of course it's Jack! *feels incredibly stupid* Still great work. Look forward to reading more. Quote
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